Previously on The Chronicles of Maya: Care…..matters!
Maya was feeling low after continuously being betrayed and backstabbed by people she considered friends. She longed for love and affection and hoped that Z, whom she loved deeply, would reciprocate her feelings someday.
She noticed that she was always the one initiating conversations with Z, and it was getting exhausting. She decided to stop texting and calling him and wait for him to make an effort to reach out to her.
Eight days later, at 1:00 am, Maya received an unexpected message from Z on WhatsApp. He asked her what time she sleeps, and Maya was curious as to why he wanted to know. Z responded that he was lonely and that people had made him feel like a troublemaker.
Despite his drunken state, Maya decided to continue the conversation and check if he was okay. Z expressed his frustration with his friends and ex-girlfriend for not understanding him and claimed that no one loved him. Maya tried to comfort him, reminding him of the positive changes he had made in his life.
Z acknowledged her support and revealed that he was going back to Rohtak, his hometown, for his mother’s birthday. Maya expressed her desire to meet him before he left, and Z eagerly agreed.
Before ending the conversation, Maya finally confessed her love for Z, and he promised to discuss it when they met.
Excited and hopeful, Maya messaged Anil, telling him about the conversation she had with Z. Anil replied with a smiley face, seemingly supportive.
However, Anil was staying at Z’s place that same night and had also heard about the conversation. Anil ignored Maya’s message and poured himself another drink, leaving his intentions unclear
to be continued…..
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More to come… I don’t know why but I have an uncanny feeling that Maya will become negative in future. And I’m sure Z or zan won’t say yes atleast not so soon because writers never make things easy. Do they?
Oh this makes me want to read more and find out what happens!
Love Maya’s character.. this is an excellent chapter that gives us wanting more. You’re very gifted!
Ok so now this is getting like a true thriller. How do you manage to keep a few cards unopened? awesome. I really wish, Anil is helping Maya by making Z speak up the truth.
Oh, wow! I want to read more. I think Z loves Maya. I do-or at least I hope he does. Can’t wait to read more.
This is so intriguing. I hope everything works out.
I feel like Anil is the devil in disguise but I am curious and hope he is helping Maya with Z not sabotaging.
She needs to let him go. It sounds like she will get hurt once again.
Very interesting twist! Thanks for this great story!
Why is Maya looking for so much validation from Z. Oh the innocent heart that loves !
Writing a suspense story is a tough task and u ace that skill. You make sure the reader comes back to your blog just to know if Anil is a friend or foe! or if Z loves Maya? or if Maya would be bluffed or crossed over! gosh.. m waiting for the next blog.. when is it coming? Monday or before that?
Monday!
Sigh, I need to know what Anil is up to!
This is a great piece of writing, very talented. I will go back and read previous chapters. Well done.
It’s probably Anil who will bring them together, he is definitely preparing something.
What an interesting situation. I am looking forward to hearing what happens next. No one is perfect, but is this something they can work past…
I really wish that Maya would move on with her life. It’s obvious that Z doesn’t love her and she deserves so much better.
Does he or doesn’t he? I can’t wait to find out!!
Interesting read! I wonder what will happen next in the chronicles!
What a great storyline. This little blurb has definitely left me wanting more.
the story is becoming more and more interesting! I waiting for the next part of the story and I really want to know more! What Anil is up to? so curious!
P.S. I do hope Zan loves Maya!
I stopped by to see if the new part is published. it’s not yet! I hoped sp badly!
Great writing. I think that Maya will wake up one day and move on the find her Mr. Right…or maybe her Mrs. Right. I do believe that there is someone out there that we are supposed to be with and when you find that person it is no longer work. The problem is after relationships like that we often close ourselves off from the possibilities. Keep it up!
Wow, this story is taking unexpected turns. What a wild ride through a great piece of writing!
very interesting! I am going to go back to your previous posts and see what I have been missing because it seems like I just stumbled into the middle of a story! Looking forward to more! Blessings!
An interesting story and I would love to know what’s next. Hopefully it will be a sweet and wonderful ending. – Knycx Journeying
This is so intriguing! I would love to read more to see what happens.
I saw the date 6th march, and its bit significant day in my life. Anil seems to be a tricky person, would want to know what is his role in between Maya and Z.
We’ll see!
This is the first I am reading of Maya. I defiantly need to catch up.
Such an intriguing story. I definitely think Zan loves her, but doesn’t know how to show it.
This is my first time reading this and I can’t wait to read more and catch up!
I can’t stand how much Z is yanking her chain. I know he has been hurt but she is putting herself out there and not getting anything in return. I hope she gets the answers she so desperately needs.
This is just getting better and better. I honestly wish she would just move on.. shes better then this!!
I need to know what’s going to happen! You’re really keeping us on our toes ^^
This is truly fascinating! Now I want to know all about it.
i am amazed how u are able to hold the attention in every sentence. Really talented indeed, waiting for the next part
Is this a story series? Quite interesting!
yup
What an interesting story! I would love to follow the storyline..
This is so intriguing. I looking forward to what happens next.
This is such a fascinating read. It isn’t one of those readings that you can predict the end of. There were so many things I didn’t see coming. Thank you for sharing this, I hope this all has a happy ending.
wow this is so intriguing.. i am so curious now cant wait to find out what lies ahead..hope the ending is nice
Hihi….now, this is a story I so much must follow! Great flow of events!
wow so much twisted.This is so intriguing .I would love to read more.Thanks for sharing.
the longer the story goes the more it get exciting…it keeps waiting for your next post
I am reading this story for the first time, very interesting story. Waiting for the next part. I will love to read more.to see what happens.
I feel like Anil is going to bring them together…
hmm…I think something great between them is gonna happen next 😀 Am looking forward again for the next chapter as always 😀 cheers, siennylovesdrawing
Again… suspense! I’ll have to wait to find out. I enjoy your short episodes and can’t wait for the next.
he says people think he’s a troublemaker. Wonder if that’s only when he drinks?
Her feelings are so relatable, I love to continue reading.
They say he’s a trouble maker, also likes to drink – those should be her red flags right there. I personally think this gal needs to get over him and move on. We’ll see what happens
I don’t think Z loves Maya. I’ve dated guys like that before and lemme tell you, they don’t feel the same way lol. Wishing Maya will be okay on the next chapter. Stay strong girl!
wow…now this is getting intense…I am worried now..hope Anil is not in love with Maya..is their going to be love triangle?
Who knowa!
I wish Maya would stay away from Zan, he is just using her. I can’t wait to see what happens between the two of them!
I think Z doesn’t know how to tell Maya that he’s just not that into her. Would love to read what happens next.
You’ve certainly got my attention! What’s going to happen next? Any chance of a sneak peek? 😀
Hmmm I think Maya should stay away from Z! Lol Can’t wait to read what happens next!
He’s not that into her. She needs to stop or her heart will break.
Ah, finally, Maya confronted Z about how she feeling. Well, I don’t want him to break her heart.
Reading this as a part of the blogaberryDazzel but this makes me wanna get more background on the charecters especially this anil guy
This is interesting and intriguing. Would like to read the sequel. I agree that it’s human nature to love and be loved
I have to read more chapters to get to know the story better. I really hope it has a happy ending for Maya.
If you have to ask, the answer is no. You need to constantly be asking someone for reassurance, the right person will. Seems to be that she needs to learn how to love herself and build more self worth
Iam now getting suspicious of this Anil guy. Is he playing both of them for his benefit? And i think Maya maybe better off without Z as he clearly has issues – jumping from one topic to another, cribbing one instant and talking of travelling the next.
Oh wow can’t wait to know what happens I think Z may forget he talked to Maya due to the drinking but Anil may just end up spoiling it for Maya. Waiting for the next.
I so wanted to read on the next chapter. Cussing the suspense of Maya, z and anil. Z might not say yes but anil likes her but Maya loves z. This is what I am thinking
So Maya confessed, but Z was so normal when he heard her, and Anil at Z’s place? I hope he is helping Maya.. or maybe he is having some feeling for Maya.. You have kept us hooked girl 🙂
Glad that you are here in February to in Blogabeerrydazzle. The story is getting more and more interesting. Would Maya become more negative in future?
I want to tell Maya that, ‘ Girl, give yourself more grace and don’t go behind him’ Being ignored so much is a red flag at the beginning of any relationship
looking forward to reading more of the story
In my opinion Maya really should maintain gap from Z. I really want to know what happened next.
Looks like everyone has an agenda. I somehow feel the relationship is too toxic for Maya. She might as well walk into the sunset alone. Curious to know what happens next.
Such an interesting read. Cant wait for more!
Ooo now you have me on the edge of my seat, I can’t wait to learn and read more x
Looking forward to see how this one ends!
I am glad Maya did not contact him first. It was great that he contacted first, but when she realized he was drunk… she should have cut it off and not brought up the “is he in love with me”. It is not her responsibility to make sure he is okay. If wants to feel bad about himself then that is his own situation to deal with. Why message Maya if he is at home with Anil. He could have brought up his problems with him… Something seems fishy about that situation.
Oh wow! Now Anil is upto something for sure. He either knows everything what’s going on in Z’s mind or maybe he is the culprit, who is gonna create some issues in future! Awaiting the next chapter
Ah such a wonderful style of writing. Will be waiting for what is coming next.
It has been interesting to see your characters develop bit by bit. I’m curious to know where their story is heading!
I am intrigued to know what happens with Maya! I don’t know why but I feel Anil is not the guy he portrays himself to be. Looking forward to reading more…
This is going great. I have read a coue of episodes earlier too.
Oh my god! I am hooked!! What happens next???
Love is tricky and you have expressed that beautifully
I hope Maya moves on soon, it clearly isn’t going to end well for her.. I know everyone must go through this at least once, but the signs seem so clear from an outside perspective, and she’s just dragging it out and going to get hurt.
This has all the makings of a romantic drama. You have the readers riveted and wondering what will happen next.
Waiting waiting waiting now for Z’s answer.
I can’t wait to see what happens!
This is going on too long now,…I do not want to wait any longer 🙂 Please spill the beans. Will it be Anil who loves her and they end up together?
So many ups, downs, and twist and the story is getting interesting, I would be interested to know what’s next – knycx journeying
cant wait to see how this story unfolds , what role does Anil plays and if Maya gets the answer she expects from Z
Loving this story. I feel like Anil’s character will unfold more in the future. What is he up to? and… why!
I really love the story and the twist. I can’t wait for more.
I wonder what is to happen next, and also where self love plays into Maya’s story.
Oh it’s becoming more interesting now. Waiting to read more and see how the story unfolds. Will look forward for Z’s answer.
Every part of this series leaves me wanting more… I think Z loves Maya. I hope he does
Maya finally expressed her feelings. Let’s see how story unfolds. Just curious to see the role of Anil in this story. Waiting for next part.
This wants me feel more to read … its a feeling maya will become little negative.. waiting for more
I am a bit lost after reading this. I would have to go back and read the full series. But I love the way you write.
Again a cliff hanger. Eagerly waiting to know what Maya would say.
I first reaction was why is there a to be continued…
I am enjoying the twists and turns in this story and really wanting to know more.
because it is not going to end so soon.
Wow!! Love the suspense u are creating 🙂 look forward to ur next blog 🙂
This feels like a thriller.
Hope Maya will be with her better half in the coming story.❤️
I am a bit like Maya – always the first one to reach out to someone and trying to see the best in them 🙂
I have read all the parts till now & waiting for ur next post to know what happens next.
Also, is it a fiction or an inspired real story?
ohh my….this storyline always getting me hook up for next one, can’t wait for next chapter. cheers, siennylovesdrawing
I am fan of this story. It seems like an episode every week and I dont want to.miss it.
The story is shaping up well. But I don’t think Z loves Maya. I hope Maya will realise this once the fantasizing is over.
Wow. This is getting interest with each post… now I want to knw what will be Z’s reply. Though I doubt it will be a Yes. I knw writers don’t give in so easily so expecting a twist in the tale.
Omg! I Don’t know why but I feel something fishy between Mr.Z and Anil. Just hoping Maya doesn’t get betrayed by her love and her friend. Fingers Crossed!
Geez I want to know what will happen next? What will be Maya’s next move?
Love is a very complicated emotion. I feel Maya should not have confessed during that phone call again. Sometimes, it hurts when you are the only person in love. It is ok to be heartbroken once and forever, than waiting for the other person to love you..
Hoping the best for Maya
I really doubt z loves Maya. I think he just hates being alone,he only wants Maya for entrainment sake.
This is so interesting! I can’t wait to find out what’s gonna happen next 🙂
Wow i eagerly wait for your post . Very interesting twist! Thanks for this great story!I like these kind of stories
Looks like it has been based on a true story. Was it?
Why do you think so?
I wanna know why Z didn’t talk to Anil since he was at his house. Why message Maya?
and the saga continues. Good read – I hope all ends well for Maya
Getting even more interesting. Really want to know what anil is trying to Do.
Interesting character….. Of Maya….. Will be waiting for your next blog …. Love to read your content….. ♥
Don’t leave us in suspense ~~!! I would love to find out what’s happening next~? Interesting story and thanks a lot for sharing it with us. – Knycx Journeying
Exciting! I think deep down Z does love Maya, but just doesn’t know it yet.
I have been following along with this Chronicle for a while now and I can say it must really hurt to be Maya. Somehow I also associate it with the way women are taught to take all the pain and survive through it. It feels as though Zan is consciously in control of the narrative and the last word although this is all about Maya. The same way women are often secondary characters in their own story. What a raw and painful way of portraying the truth.
Let’s see if Z will respond to Maya’s anxious wants to be loved by him. Who knows, life is a strange thing.
I am nervous about what will happen next but I am also excited. I just wish the best for Maya. She deserves to be loved.
Hmmm. This is interesting. I’m curious to know how this turns out. Let’s see what happens next.
This piece made me miss those pocketbooks I was reading when I was in college. I was actually smiling while reading this.
A wonderful piece of writing. Thanks for sharing a tidbit!
This is getting more and more interesting each time I read a new episode!
The suspense is killing me! I look forward to reading more…