Previously on The Chronicles of Maya: Confusion is in the Air
Maya had a best friend named Pooja who she felt was a bit immature but still nice. However, Maya began to feel like Pooja was not entirely genuine as she noticed her becoming friends with another person named Zan. Maya suspected that Pooja only befriended Zan for her own benefit and didn’t care about others.
One day, Zan called Maya while driving back to Gujarat with his brother. Maya was ecstatic as it was the first time Zan had called her first, but little did she know that Zan’s elder brother was also with him. Maya didn’t inform Zan that she was going out, and Zan didn’t tell her about his brother’s presence.
On the 21st of March, Maya’s trip was postponed due to bad weather. Irritated by the delay, she decided to go to Delhi Delights, the only cafe near her house, to order some food for dinner. As she approached the counter, she was taken aback by what she saw, and her heart skipped a beat.
to be continued…
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Aye carumba, what is the storm coming, will it be from Zan’s brother? From her random friend Pooja? Cant wait to see what happens when Zan & Maya meet up!
Interesting excerpt … would surely like to read the whole story – to know how Maya braved the storm.
What is the future of the relationship if Maya has been doing the bulk of the work of keeping the relationship going?
NO! Moni, it is not fair! I want more! what did Maya see in the restaurant. I hope it’s Zan! Can’t wait for the next part as usual
Yes, as you get to know your friends better you also learn more about them. And you know what, it doesn’t change with age! You’d think when you’re more mature you’d know better. OK and now I’m like wanting to know so bad what happens next!
I am loving the continuation of this love story. You are an amazing writer!
Ooh. I can’t wait to see what she saw! The anticipation!
I look forward to seeing what happens next. With the way things have been going in Maya’s life, it’s definitely going to be something intriguing.
Can’t wait to know what she saw at the Cafe .Interesting to know what twist Pooja would bring to this story.
Always fun to continue reading the story- now I need to go back and catch up, as I think I missed one of the posts!
I just love the talent you have for setting up a scene so well with the characters and leaving at the point where the reader is wondering what is to happen next. Great way to build anticipation for how this will all turn out…
I am just wondering the level of patience Maya has for this relationship. I just hope that she doesn’t go through anything terrible now.
Interesting part. I bet these details are up to something on the next scenes! Waiting!
Oh, I am curious on what she saw. Can’t wait for the continuation.
I can’t wait to read what happens next. What storm is brewing?
What’s the future of this relationship? I read your previous entries and I know Maya has been carrying the relationship forward all by herself.
I’m still eagerly waiting for the resolution here:)
Can’t wait to read so congratulations to you for hooking me up.
You have ample writing talent.
I don’t know what I am waiting more of … the storyline of the friendship or the love interest.
Time definitely changes everyone – because we learn new things about the world, ourselves and others! Hopefully, people change for the positive but not everyone sees other people’s change as being positive! It’s all about perspective.
Oooh what did Maya see?! Looking forward to the next instalment. Great writing!
Hmm, the hook is very interesting. I want to know about what happens after this. Does she still have patience for this relationship?
Oh man, what’s Maya going to do next!?
Seriously, she needs to purge him out of her life and move on to bigger and better things. It feels like she keeps opening old wounds.
Oh you left us in suspense this time! Looking forward to seeing what made her heart skip a beat.
I can’t wait to see what the next installment brings. Maya’s life is so full of turmoil. I hope one day she finds exactly what she’s looking for.
I love how each little bit you share leaves us wanting more. I can’t wait to hear who or what Maya saw at the restaurant!
Oh dear it sounds like there is going to be trouble ahead. I’d like to read what happens next.
ohh my…while reading this, it triggers my thought about something not favorable will happen between them? As the title of this story ~ storm story, am looking very much forward to find out. cheers, siennylovesdrawing
It sounds like there’s a twist coming!! Why didn’t Zan tell Maya that his brother was coming, too? Why didn’t Maya tell Zan that she was going out? I’ll be interested to see what happens next 🙂
I can’t wait to see what happens next in this series! It’s been exciting to read and follow along!
The next one is going to be exciting! What make Maya skip her heart?! What will her brother say
I look forward to seeing where this story leads. You have my attention.
Wah this is interesting! I am looking forward to find out what Maya may do next!
Hihi…Moni, why do you keep on dragging my heart, like this? I just can’t wait for that “moment”…..
A story that fills me with questions and keeps me in suspense? Who will bring this storm?
Ah, good to see Zan paying attention to her and called her. Looking forward to knowing what happens next.
cant wait to watch this as a movie,,,i hope netflix would make a movie out of it
What did she see? Can’t wait to read more!
So looking forward to what’s coming next …..
I think Maya should not carry all the burden. I think Zan should also give time and attention to their relationship.
Wow, can’t wait to find out what Maya saw at the cafe? Perhaps she will become interested in Zan’s brother?
Ack the mystery. So what did she see? Is this the storm that will be coming?
Don’t leave us hanging like that. Can’t wait for the further part.
It’s getting quite interesting and I can’t wait to read the next part.
I loved reading this story about Maya and Zan. I can’t wait to read about what happens next…
What happens next? I want to know!
I can’t wait to read what happens next. I love these stories they are the best.
time changes every one either in a good way or bad. , this sentence that you have mentioned holds so true … so whom did she meet.. I was looking down to scroll and read that 🙂
Maya saw Zan with another woman? When will you finish the mystery? Waiting since long now.
You always leave is wanting more! What did she see?! I have to know. Eeee! I can’t wait til next time ♡
Did Maya see zan with someone else.. Don’t tell me.. Want more this is definitely increasing my curiosity.
Wow sounds intriguing! I cant wait to find what happens next. What has Maya seen!
Hmm, peace before the storm… I am thinking bad things are going to happen, and Maya is going to get herself hurt…
patience and positivity this lady has.. I am actually curious now to know what lies in her near future.. just waiting for the next part
I like to think of peace after the storm, not the other way around. It gets much creepier to think that there’s danger coming after peace.
What could she have seen? I can’t wait for the next episode.
Oh god! Again twist. I really wanted to know what she saw and what will be her next step. Eagerly waiting for next chapter…
You keep us hooked and you leave us wanting more! Waiting for the next one!
This is a interesting story and is very accurate in real life we have fake friends. Those people that only see what they can get out of you. I can’t wait to see more of the story.
Oh so much suspense. Waiting to know why her heart skipped a beat. What could really be there??? Hmmmmm….
Hmmm….Does she see Zan with Pooja or does she see his brother and fall for him?!
I can’t wait to see what happens next!!
Thrilling! Can’t get enough of this chapter. I wish to read the whole story.
That’s very intriguing, cant wait to read further.
An interesting excerpt from a story. I would love to know more about the character and where they end up.
This is not fair you always leave us with suspense. I liked your story & storytelling, waiting to read the next chapter aka post.
Would deffo prefer seeing the whole thing.
Uh oh, I sense a big battle soon between Zan and Maya for not telling each other the truth. The last paragraph is a show stopper, I wonder what Maya saw!
Did she see Zan’s brother? Or did she see Zan? I am curious now.
There is so much suspense in this story! Really keeping us on our toes.
oh mannnn!!! I love your story, now i wanna know what is gonna happen next!!!
I can’t wait to see her reaction to the brother being with him.
Too much left for my imagination…. waiting for the next one
Will Maya find true love in Zens brother? Waiting for next!
You always manage to keep u shooked, waiting for next 🙂
This cliff hanger has generated so much curiosity in me now that I just want to know what happens next. Eagerly awaiting the next part.
Oh man, what a twist. Now can’t wait to see the next part.
OK, this got me excited, now I want to know more..what happens next?
OMG! This is so exciting! Can’t wait for the next part!
You know the art of hooking up your readers. with each chapter, the story is turning interesting. looking forward to know what happen next?
Can’t wait to find more what happened to Maya! Your first sentence sums up everything.. Some people are two faced. We need to get rid of them.
Can’t wait to see what she saw at the restaurant … I hope it is not one of her exes. The story is getting a lil predictable now but maybe you’ll introduce a new angle in the next chapter.
okay… i am intrigued! i want to know what she saw! i want to know what the storm signifies in your story 🙂 and i definitely want to know what’s the angle about the brother! hehe – looking forward to reading the next installment.
This story is getting more and more interesting. Would love to read more about what’s in store next.
You are such a talented writer that is for sure. I am enjoying this ongoing story and cant wait for what happens next x
Looks like trouble ahead? Isn’t it? Looking forward to the next part!
Arey how can you leave at that?? It was so short this time! Waiting for next part eagerly
The story is taking so many turns, your narration style is excellent. keep going.
Now that was one cliffhanger. Curious to know what happens next.
Oh man the story is getting exiting at every turn and now I am really waiting to know what did Maya see that stunned her…. waiting to knw what will happen next.
Now, this is exciting what Maya saw? What kind of storm is waiting for her? can’t wait to read the next part.
This post makes every reader think of what will happen next. Agree with Surbhi, we are hooked and looking forward to know what will happen next!
Why did stop in the end, suspense is killing me. Story keep me hooked ,so interesting.
what’s in store for Maya? she has already been through a lot. I hope she has a sweet surprise in store
Oh, again a suspense to the end… I am dying to know what is going to happen next.
I loved reading this story about Maya and Zan. The story binds the reader till the last. Beautifully expressed thoughts.
I feel Pooja is up to something. The story has so many twists and turns. Keeps you guessing. Looking to see what happens next.
You have left us high… waiting for the next part
Ah! This is too short. What did she see? The suspense is becoming unbearable. Please do something about the lenght.
I wish I was more like Maya ! She seems quite level headed even though smitten with love.
I love the suspense turn that this story is taking. I would love to know what did Maya see. Hiding things from each other can give rise to a fight maybe.
Cliff hanger…. I so wanna know more about Maya… Sometimes I get so angry with her for entertaining Zan..
Interesting story… Can’t wait what comes next for Maya!
You definitely weave the story with great suspense I’m eagerly waiting to know what she saw
I am loving this story episode by episode. This story has maintained the curiosity between us since its first post.
This is only post i eagerly wait in this blog hop . I am so curious to know about what happens after this . I wish we could see the positive ending
What happens next? I want to find out what’s going to change their plans. The suspense is too much.
This is turning out to be quite an interesting twist to the tale, I want to know what will be Maya’s reaction? Can’t wait to read more.
Oh! I’ve heard that phrase before. It’s so atmospheric! Very exciting! I hope there will be peace coming out of all this though.
People come into your life for a reason… they may only last a season… or two, but make sure you learn the lesson and apply to people in the future.
This should be turned into a TV series! Lol so gripping…. Maya girl you deserve to be happy.