The End: Part 2

Previously on The Chronicles of Maya: The End Part 1

Maya had decided to take matters into her own hands. She boarded a flight from Mumbai to Delhi and then traveled for two more hours until she reached Rohtak, where she had Zan’s address.

Maya had not informed anyone about her trip, leaving only a message on a sticky note saying that she had an urgent errand to run and would be back by the following day.

As Maya stepped out of the cab and approached Zan’s villa, she was astounded by its opulence. Zan had always told her that he came from a middle-class family, but the large gate with two security guards and the luxurious bungalow behind it told a different story.

The security guards asked Maya whom she wanted to meet, and she replied that she wanted to see Mrs. Shehrawat. When they asked if she had an appointment, she nodded her head. However, the guards informed her that Mrs. Shehrawat did not meet with anyone without an appointment.

Maya pleaded with the guards to let her inside, explaining how important it was for her to meet Mrs. Shehrawat. But the guards refused to budge. Suddenly, a car approached from behind, and a middle-aged man stepped out and asked what was going on.

The guards explained the situation to the man, who looked at Maya and asked if she was there to sell information about their rivals. Maya broke down in tears and fell to her knees, revealing that she was pregnant with Zan’s child and that she simply wanted a father for her child.

The man, Sopan Ahluwalia, introduced himself as Zan’s maternal uncle and said that if what Maya said was true and the child was their heir, he would ensure that Zan and his family accepted it. He took Maya inside the house and promised to help her.

Maya was overjoyed at the prospect of her child having a father’s name and felt grateful to Sopan for his kindness.

 

 

 

 

to be continued…

 

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40 thoughts on “The End: Part 2”

  1. Always love how you weave the suspense and the story gets the twists. Loved this part too. Only I wish the photos could have a different shades to grab more attention. Just a thought.

  2. Shreemayee Chattoppadhyay

    I’m so excited to know what will be the reaction of Zan and his family when they’ll hear it. Will they accept or she’ll be harmed by them. I’m worried about Maya.

  3. Milan Singhal

    Been following Maya’s storyline and it is getting more interesting. I wonder what happens next!!

  4. Hey!!! I dont knkw if this is the reaction you are going for…but maya is making me very angry…why does she throw herself at others mercy? Why she needs zans or his families approval?

    Earlier also she was afraid zan would not believe her and believe his brother…

    This is one complex character

  5. That’s great to know that she has reached his hometown and house. It is getting more interesting. I wonder what happens next!!

  6. Hope the Zan uncle could bring justice to her and Zan also accept the situation. But will Maya will left heart broken or will Zan family accept her is now a big suspense.

  7. The plot thickens as it nears the end. The story is very interestingly poised. Looking forward to what happens next in Maya’s life. Sandy N Vyjay

  8. Looking forward to see how Zan reacts. Sounding like a broken record, but there is something fishy about him. Curious to know how the Sopan angle plays out.

  9. Hope things will get better for Maya. She has already gone through lot if turmoil. But who knows.. You might come up with another twist.. Hahaha

  10. Story of Maya and Zan is getting interesting by the day. I am so curious if thr family will accept that maya is pregnant and what will they do. I am worried about Maya as I feel this could be a trap as well so that she doesn’t spoil the name of family.

  11. I doubt if Zan’s family will accept Maya and the child. The story seems to have another twist towards the end.
    Glued for another exciting episode:)

  12. Phew!! You have left us hanging in there for dear life….A what next-I want to know feeling as i reached the end. When? Is now the major question. Hooked on completely! Interesting read as always….

  13. Suhasini I.P.

    I am waiting to see how Zan would react. Interesting twist and happy that Maya has reached her home

  14. Bedabrata Chakraborty

    Your episodic stories take me back to my childhood. I would eagerly wait for the Sunday edition of newspaper just to read the series.

  15. The Other Brain Inc.

    Oh my this is now getting more interesting and I am displeased with you as I thought I would know the end in this part itself. Eager to read it soon.

  16. I am not sure I understand this character Maya. Why would she need validation from a guy who abused her and took advantage of her. All she had to do was inform Zan and just move on. Come on there are so many who get pregnant before marriage and there is absolutely nothing wrong with that. Anyway would love to know what happens next.

  17. Though the story is going so well I didn’t like Maya pleading Zans family for mercy and support. She could have done it in more respectable way. Now I am keen to know what happend next.

  18. I can’t wait to learn more! Wow, the story got so intense! I haven’t been reading for a while and reading piece by piece gives a totally different impression!

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