The Other Perspective

Spoiler Alert: Next Update will be from the point of view of Z and that too in his words!

Previously on The Chronicles of Maya: In The Hope of Yes

 

Zan and Anil had planned to come over to Maya’s house for a small get-together on March 3rd before Zan left for his hometown on March 6th. Maya noticed that whenever she was engrossed in conversation with Anil, Zan’s expressions changed, although they all seemed to be having a good time talking and laughing.

Maya was aware that Anil had recently broken up with his girlfriend Sana, who was cheating on him during his birthday party. However, despite the breakup, he didn’t seem sad, but rather worried. Maya observed everything keenly, trying to understand the situation.

As Zan excused himself to use the restroom, Anil took Maya’s hand and whispered in her ear that Zan’s wedding was fixed and that it was an arranged marriage. Maya felt shattered and heartbroken at the news.

When Zan returned from the restroom, Maya mustered the courage to ask him if his mother was planning his wedding. Zan had a smug expression on his face as he responded that only his mother could find an ideal partner for him, as she knew what was best for him.

Maya knew that it would be best for them to leave soon, and politely but firmly told them that she had work the next day, and they should head back to their apartment. Anil understood her message and stood up to leave. However, Zan seemed unaware of the situation and tried to inquire if Maya was feeling sick.

Maya stuck to her work excuse and asked them to leave. As they left, Maya couldn’t control her emotions and broke down. But she reminded herself that it was for her own good.

As Zan and Anil walked towards Z’s apartment, which was only a block away from Maya’s, Zan shed a tear and Anil felt his heart sink. They didn’t speak a word to each other during the entire walk.

 

            to be continued…..

 

 

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Was it a lie that Anil and Z said to Maya? Will Maya ever get to know that Z was hurt too?

 

 

 

 

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127 thoughts on “The Other Perspective”

  1. Kuntala Bhattacharya

    Turning it to be more and more suspicious. Why will they lie to Maya and why not? Yes would like to know about Zan too.

  2. This story is getting interesting with every chapter. I don’t want to imagine what will happen. I want your to tell. How do you manage to leave each chapter at such a turn….

  3. wow love this story get really interesting each episode and waiting for next! Thanks for sharing with us.

  4. Oh well!! I definitely didn’t see this coming.But I don’t think they lied. Why would they? For what purpose? If Zan didn’t confirm it, it’d be understandable. But he did. I don’t know what to think.

  5. He had a smug look on his face when she asked, as it may have been a lie? If it WAS a lie, and he went along with it, then I officially hate Z and hope Maya chooses not to be with him if there is no arranged marriage after all.

  6. This is maybe my fourth time tuning into this story, and it gets more and more interesting every time I come back. I hope that you keep writing this for for a long time at least a while, it’s a nice story to read. Thanks for posting!

  7. its sounds creepy,,,who is lying and who is telling the truth….fix marriage is not popular here in our country

  8. Love where this is going. It’s becoming my go to ‘drama series’ on the internet. I can’t wait for the next installment!

  9. I am definitely hooked on Maya and Z’s story. Yes, I would hear the story from Zan’s point of view. Excited. 🙂

  10. I feel bad for Maya here. Your story really makes me read more. Looking forward to the next episode

  11. Yes, I want to know Z side of the story. I am sure he has started loving Maya, but due to his history, he is afraid of hurting her & himself.

  12. After always chasing this story & looking forward for next chapter, this is really an exciting story to read. I strongly encourage you to make it a book, sure lots of ppl will be loving it. cheers, siennylovesdrawing

  13. This chapter is more interesting and infact, I had to browse earlier chapters once again, I lost this story track from my mind. So sorry!

  14. Melanie williams

    Ooo now here we get much deeper, you writings always have me on the edge of my seat…can’t wait to read more x

  15. Geez, this story keeps working my emotions for Maya and whey are these guys so shady? I mean I get it that this arrange marriage thing can be hard but dang!

  16. I think Maya should just move on and find someone else. If there is no communication between Maya and Z, then getting into that relationship has no happy ending.

  17. I feel Z is lying for sure! I am looking forward to the next episode to see if I am right. Love reading Maya’s life.

  18. You had me wanting for more! I love how the plot makes a twist and turn! I can’t wait for the next one! Pretty please….

  19. OKAY. This episode is very interesting but I’m completely lost in the story as I didn’t read the previous episodes. You’re such a good writer, I am going back to read the previous Chapters ASAP. I appreciate you for sharing such a story.

  20. So does that mean z loves her as well? Or maybe wants her to get over him & hence lied about the wedding….made anil lie too? Will Anil & maya end up together now that he is single.

  21. I couldn’t help wonder what will happen next? I mean, the story gets me hooked.
    What will happen next to Maya???

  22. Priyanka Chhabria

    Every chapter becomes more interesting than the one before! Excited to read Zan’s part of story.

  23. i am feeling more miserable than mAYA AND Wud like to request you to please make a happy ending ,,, inspite the spoiler has already come. i wish Maya is the girl choosen by Z’s mothers

  24. the story seems to be getting more exciting .. really love the way you are nareaitng and now I am so engaged and curious to know what is next on the line.. great job

  25. Super cool story line and enjoyed this read! Definitely looking forward to more and will be back to check out more of your site 🙂 Love the writing style too!

  26. The thing with most love stories is that it always has its share of melodrama with all the crying and hysteria. Your story is taking a different turn with Z’s marriage on the cards.

  27. This story is getting interesting with every chapter. I don’t want to imagine what will happen. I want your to tell. How do you manage to leave each chapter at such a turn….

  28. From reading this whole series so far. I don’t think I trust either Z or Anil. Something fishy is going on and I think Maya knows what she needs to do.

  29. Aishwarya Sandeep

    Each episode is like a new story in itself. You are a blessed writer indeed. Yes, life can be mean and complicated. Can’t wait to hear the reality behind Z and Anil’s lie.

  30. Day by day the chronicles of Maya takes a new turn. I am so intrigued by the twists and turns in your story. I loved the way you let the audience perceive the characters and their emotions with your writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

  31. The story is turning interesting each day and somewhere as I had thought, I still feel Anil is goofing around and what he told to Maya may not be true. He is playing a game here.

  32. I am definitely invested into the story now. I am going to have to start and read it in its entirety. It pulls you in just in the little bit I have read. What will happen next? Dun dun dun.

  33. So it was a little odd starting a story in the middle (because I think this is my first time to your site), but I like where this is going. I definitely like where this is going. So I’m going to head back to the beginning to start this story from the top!

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