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Let Me Do Something

February 24, 2022 by Moni 51 Comments

Lucky: I don’t love Pari anymore, my love for her is dead. I’m there with her just because she’s my business partner. I love you, Misha, you gotta understand that. And if I didn’t love you I wouldn’t talk to u at 3 am.

Lucky kept on trying to convince Misha, as they were talking on Google Duo video call.

Misha: Ok. I understand. If you truly love me will you let me do something?

Lucky: Yes my love, anything you say. Anything.

Misha: I really wanna bite your neck. It looks juicy.

Lucky: What… What do you mean?

Lucky was baffled he didn’t know what to say and how to react.

Misha: You said that you love me, didn’t you? Then let me do something as it’s 3 am.

Lucky: You mean cybersex?

Misha winked and urged him to close his eyes.


As soon as Lucky closed his eyes, Misha pierced the screen, entered the room, and bit his neck, sucking out every drop of blood from his body.

Lucky opened his eyes as he fell to the ground. He was terrified to see Misha there as he was dying. Everything happened too fast for him to understand or react. But now that he was on the floor, he realized that he was dying. The last thing he saw was Misha laughing devilishly.

Lucky woke up sweating profusely in his bed and called Pari. She didn’t receive it at first but Lucky kept on calling.

Pari: What happened? Are you Okay?

Lucky: I love you baby. You are the love of my life. I realized you are the only one for me. I’ll never leave you no matter what.

Pari: Yeah… Ok… I love you too. It’s 2:50 am. Let me sleep and you too sleep.

As soon as Pari disconnected the call Lucky saw the notification of an incoming call on Duo from Misha. It was 2:55 am.

 



 

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Comments

  1. Pooja Jha says

    February 25, 2022 at 2:44 am

    Ha Ha Ha.. beautifully narrated, All words expressed the story quite well, I am thinking if Lucky recieves the call or ignores and sleeps, May be sleeps for the night. Wonderfully written

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 25, 2022 at 9:39 am

      Thanks

      Reply
  2. Mayuri Nidigallu says

    February 25, 2022 at 9:02 am

    Loved it!

    Our conscience does not go to sleep even when we think we are patting it into a lull!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 25, 2022 at 9:39 am

      Thanks

      Reply
  3. Harjeet Kaur says

    February 25, 2022 at 5:47 pm

    OMG..what a gory tale. I was so relieved it was just a dream. How do you come out with such stories I wonder 🙂 Keep writing

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 25, 2022 at 6:02 pm

      Thanks…

      Reply
  4. Meetali Kutty says

    February 25, 2022 at 6:14 pm

    Wow, that creeped me out! Great twist ending 🙂

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 25, 2022 at 6:15 pm

      Thanks

      Reply
  5. Varsh says

    February 26, 2022 at 8:18 am

    Lucky isn’t so lucky after all, huh?
    Well-narrated. Hope his new-refound for Pari saves him from being bitten!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 3:02 am

      Who knows… Lol. But glad u liked it.

      Reply
    • Vasumathi says

      February 27, 2022 at 11:45 pm

      Dont receive that call!

      Talk about uncanny coincidences. Was totally hooked to the story.

      Reply
      • Moni says

        February 28, 2022 at 12:48 am

        Thanks. Glad u liked it…

        Reply
  6. Madhu Bindra says

    February 26, 2022 at 7:34 pm

    I really enjoy your writings. It wasn’t really a dream, was it? Looking forward to reading more from you.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 3:03 am

      Who knows… But glad u liked it..

      Reply
  7. Ritu Bindra says

    February 26, 2022 at 11:41 pm

    Brilliant. Trust you to come up with a shocking twist. Loved this one.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 3:00 am

      Thanks. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  8. Flavia Cutinho says

    February 27, 2022 at 5:20 am

    I Like the intimacy and horror and then kahani mein twist .

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 11:33 am

      Haha.. glad u liked it.

      Reply
  9. Swati Mathur says

    February 27, 2022 at 9:06 am

    I am glad that it was a dream. Very well written and expressed.

    Reply
  10. Shail Thosani says

    February 27, 2022 at 11:28 am

    Exciting thriller! Vampire diaries ☺️☺️. Specially loved the ending. It was an unexpected twist. Great writing!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 11:32 am

      Thanks. Glad u liked it..

      Reply
  11. Kaveri Chhetri says

    February 27, 2022 at 11:32 am

    Hahahaha… loved it… quirky n smart n convincing!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 11:33 am

      Thanks. Glad u enjoyed…

      Reply
  12. Vidhya Thakkar says

    February 27, 2022 at 1:09 pm

    ENjoyed reading this one!!!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 1:16 pm

      Thanks

      Reply
  13. Sadvika kylash says

    February 27, 2022 at 1:15 pm

    Loved it. This is one such writeup that hooks up till the last. Dream!! What a relief

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 10:19 pm

      Thank u. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  14. Sonia dogra says

    February 27, 2022 at 4:04 pm

    Haha. We can never run away from our own conscience.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 4:09 pm

      Yup. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  15. Sindhu Vinod Narayan says

    February 27, 2022 at 4:29 pm

    Omg what a thrilling read this was. I never expected it to take a turn. I. Thought it was related to vampires

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 10:20 pm

      Thank u. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  16. Bhawna Shah says

    February 27, 2022 at 7:17 pm

    Maza aagaya
    You have hooked your readers till the last word. I loved it call from Misha again at 2:55am

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 10:19 pm

      Thank u. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  17. Zenobia Merchant says

    February 27, 2022 at 7:42 pm

    This was too good. Short, crisp and juicy. Wondering what Lucky what do, to receive or not to receive would be his dilemma.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 10:18 pm

      Yeah. Glad u liked it

      Reply
  18. Kashish Mahtani says

    February 27, 2022 at 8:04 pm

    This freaked me out – I must say, mission accomplished! What a wonderfully horrific tale said in such few words!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      February 27, 2022 at 10:18 pm

      Thanks. Glad u liked it

      Reply
  19. Kashish Mahtani says

    February 27, 2022 at 8:07 pm

    What a wonderfully horrific tale said in such few words!

    Reply
  20. Jhilmil D Saha says

    February 28, 2022 at 11:49 pm

    Wow, it was scary and hilarious at the same time. What would Lucky do now!!

    Reply
  21. Abha Singh says

    March 1, 2022 at 4:42 am

    Wow. Loved this story. I am wondering what is going to happen next. Short and gripping tale.

    Reply
  22. Neelam says

    March 1, 2022 at 10:54 am

    Love this Tiny Tale. Hahaha I got shock of my life when she came out and sucked him dery

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 1, 2022 at 11:15 am

      glad u liked it

      Reply
    • Moni says

      March 2, 2022 at 9:02 pm

      Loved it…

      Reply
  23. Sandy N Vyjay says

    March 5, 2022 at 3:45 pm

    The story sure sounds scary. The twist in the tale is sudden as the first few paragraphs do not prepare the reader for what is coming up. A good narrative. Sandy N Vyjay

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 5, 2022 at 3:57 pm

      Thanks.

      Reply
  24. Raksha says

    March 5, 2022 at 9:04 pm

    Wow what a thriller. Absolutely loved your narration and story writing. It was surely gripping and I am glad it was a dream.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 5, 2022 at 9:05 pm

      Glad u likes it

      Reply
  25. Hansa Kajaria says

    March 7, 2022 at 11:08 am

    Wow what a twist in the end. Thankfully it was a dream but a call again at 2.55 by Misha? Now where is the story going. Wanna know more….

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 7, 2022 at 11:20 am

      Haha.. you can guess…

      Reply
    • Moni says

      March 8, 2022 at 12:29 pm

      Reply
  26. Noor Anand Chawla says

    May 1, 2022 at 7:45 pm

    Wow that was quite a freaky story!

    Reply

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