Maya’s Intuition

Previously on The Chronicles of Maya: Peace Before The Storm 

Maya walked into the restaurant and was surprised to see Zan sitting at the counter. It was an unexpected encounter at an odd time. As Zan noticed Maya, she couldn’t help but notice the dilation of his pupils.

Maya decided to order her takeaway and leave without engaging in any conversation with Zan. However, later that evening, Zan reached out to her and asked if he could come over and introduce her to someone.

Despite her reservations, Maya agreed to the meeting. Zan introduced her to his brother, who appeared to be an introvert. The evening went smoothly, but as they were leaving, Maya had an uneasy feeling that something was not right.

She couldn’t shake the feeling that her intuition was warning her about something.

 

 

 

to be continued…

 

70 thoughts on “Maya’s Intuition”

  1. Melissa Cushing

    So much happening in such a small read! Loved it and want to know more….. will be back!

  2. Jasmine Martin

    I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope she doesn’t ignore her intuition.

  3. Well, the saga continues, hopefully, this story will have a happy ending for Maya because she seems to be the one who has real beauty deep down.

  4. Short, but to the point and keeps you interested in the story. I’d love to find out what happens next.

  5. I believe Maya’s intuition too; I do not trust Zan, and I am worried Maya is going to get very hurt after all of this!

  6. I was reading for a minute and poof.. just like that.. to be continued.. hehe. Can’t wait for the continuation.

  7. Steven Morrissette

    This is cool love to have a little bit of a story at the time makes me want to come back more often to read the rest.

  8. You have this uncanny ability to captivate one with your stories. I’m so waiting to read what happens next 🙂

  9. What was Zan’s reasoning for coming over with his brother?? Obviously she is ignoring him! she left him at the restaurant.

  10. I enjoyed reading the piece. I can’t wait to check out what will happen next. Thank you for sharing this with us.

  11. Oh I kept scrolling to find more parts. This was full of suspense. Waiting to read the next part

  12. I am so happy with an update but it’s too bad it’s cut so short. I know I am selfish and always want to read about Maya more.

  13. Definitely she will going to feel her intuition. I really can’t wait to know what happened next

  14. ahhh i cant wait for more. I can not wait to read more about maya!!!! your such a great writer

  15. I feel like this story goes through so many emotional rollercoasters. I really can’t wait to see how all this ends. I hope Maya finds peace!

  16. Oh Maya is still here
    Was missing her. I love the way you have created this story. You can probably look at turning it into a movie or something..

  17. That’s an interesting cliff hanger … really looking forward to reading what happens next.

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