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The Final Peace

July 2, 2022 by Moni 31 Comments

Note: I wrote this piece in 2018. I wasn’t sure if I should publish it then but I’ve done it now. Please read the full story

She sat on the rock and was immersed in her thoughts.

Shlok: Missing me?

Ditvi: You bet. How did you know that I’d be here? 😊

Shlok: For ages, Rishikesh had been your place to dwell.

So, Ditvi, how was it?

Ditvi: How was what?🤨

Shlok: This birth? This life?

Ditvi: Don’t ask, it was one heck of a life. Right from childhood till the end. Although I had everything, I still couldn’t feel that happiness in my soul. 😓

Shlok: I could have said that it was your childhood trauma but your parents of this life loved you. Especially your mom.

Ditvi: Oh Please! Any form of Emotional Abuse, be it love or anything, is abuse. 😞

Also, I tried to understand people, be patient with them and all they did was to take me for granted.

Humans have become selfish with time.

Shlok: Yes, I have to agree with that. Let that topic go. Don’t stress yourself now.

But I must say you achieved a lot, career-wise. That too in many fields. ❤‍🔥

Ditvi: Haha, I was tired of that life but I couldn’t end it as per Dad’s command, so I had to do something. But I guess your life was good. You took birth with superpowers. 🤔

You were a famous poet too, I just learned. 💝

Humans will remember you forever. 😉

Shlok: The only superpower I had was a divine sight. And I always harnessed it to keep an eye on you. And, as writing poems is considered, it was always about you. Everything was always about you. ♥️

Ditvi: You were also born with memories of our past lives as well. 🤨

Shlok: Hey, taking this birth was your idea. And when dad asked if you wanted any powers or memories of this world or of your past 32 lives, you said no. So don’t blame me now. 🙄

Ditvi: I’m not blaming you. I just thought it would be fun. But… all the men I loved in this mortal life, used me, no one loved me, it sucked. The only man who loved me, I couldn’t love him. 🥺

Shlok: Yeah, I too feel bad for your husband in mortal life. ☹️

But I couldn’t love my wife either. I missed you, my partner for eternity always. (Holds her hand)

Ditvi: That’s why you kept an eye on me always 😜.

Shlok: Yes. So are you ready? ❤️

Ditvi: Now for what? 🤨

Shlok: To take a new birth 😅

Ditvi: Heck no, I’m done with living life as a mortal. No more births. But you might want to take rebirth because you had a good life. 🙄

Shlok: I don’t want to spend another 50-60 years without you.

Ditvi: 🥰 nor do I.

As they were about to kiss each other, a deep voice suddenly emerged.

Almighty: Shlok, Ditvi, it’s time to come home.

Shlok and Ditvi stopped right there and stood up.

Ditvi: Let’s go home…

Shlok smiled. They held each other’s hands and started walking until they disappeared into the thin air.

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Comments

  1. Cindy D'Silva says

    July 8, 2022 at 5:51 pm

    wow so deep! love the end!! i love all happy endings!!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 9, 2022 at 2:08 pm

      ❤️

      Reply
    • Bedabrata Chakraborty says

      July 17, 2022 at 8:14 am

      This may be open to interpretation but I somehow found the ending rather haunting. In fact I found the beginning peaceful and loving. Towards the end it was like a jolt. Can compare it to short stories by Tagore.

      Reply
  2. Kaveri Chhetri says

    July 9, 2022 at 1:54 pm

    Oh I was so used to reading your Nano tales Moni… I miss it. But this came with a different flavor and I can’t help complimenting the story creator in you… whether nano or not. the kind of plots n the twists n turns u come with… they’re truly amazing!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 9, 2022 at 2:08 pm

      I’ll continue them this was just a different one.

      Reply
  3. Kavita Singh says

    July 9, 2022 at 3:53 pm

    This definitely needed to be posted, loved it. I adored the names of the character, I am a bit biased when it comes to traditional names. The story is beautiful and I believe that true love is indeed immortal.

    Reply
  4. Harjeet Kaur says

    July 9, 2022 at 6:06 pm

    Love the storyteller in you. And happy endings are what I like. I wrote a story last week and its pathetic

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 11, 2022 at 12:39 am

      I’m glad you liked this one

      Reply
  5. Flavia Cutinho says

    July 9, 2022 at 7:09 pm

    Eternal love, lovely 1

    Reply
  6. Neeta Kadam says

    July 9, 2022 at 9:03 pm

    Wow so beautifully woven. I love to read the conversation. Kash real life mein a is a hota.

    Reply
  7. Sonia dogra says

    July 9, 2022 at 9:59 pm

    Compelling. I wanted to know how it would end.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 11, 2022 at 12:39 am

      I hope you liked the ending.

      Reply
  8. Raghav Dudeja says

    July 10, 2022 at 10:42 am

    I always thought that people would become smart and realize their mistakes as soon as they die. Ditvi mentions something around how love can be an emotional abuse too. Then falls into it, yet again.

    Guess humans (mortal or otherwise) are complicated fools

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 11, 2022 at 12:38 am

      That’s a very important point that u have pointed.

      Reply
  9. Madhu Bindra says

    July 10, 2022 at 5:39 pm

    I enjoyed reading it. This is a bit different from the ones you write. You are very talented. God bless you.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 11, 2022 at 12:38 am

      Thanks ❤️

      Reply
  10. Meetali Kutty says

    July 10, 2022 at 6:14 pm

    This is a lovely story- glad you decided to share it. I do believe true love is eternal

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 11, 2022 at 12:37 am

      ❤️

      Reply
  11. Ritu Bindra says

    July 10, 2022 at 11:46 pm

    I am in awe of your writing skills, Monidipa. You ace in any kind of writing. Love this one.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 11, 2022 at 12:37 am

      This one is my favorite too. And thanks… I’m not that good, I’m still learning.

      Reply
    • Anjali Tripathi says

      July 17, 2022 at 9:48 am

      Wow!! Beautifully knitted. Loved reading it. Your stories never fail to captivate anyone. Keep going!

      Reply
  12. Smita Saksena says

    July 11, 2022 at 8:25 am

    Wow Moni, superb post and happy ending. This was a bit different but enjoyed it . Keep writing and keep shining.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      July 11, 2022 at 9:40 am

      Thank you. ❤️

      Reply
  13. Shail Thosani says

    July 11, 2022 at 6:41 pm

    So sweet! A beautiful afterlife love story. I really believe we all have soulmates who may or may not be our life partners and some day we will meet them either in life or after.

    Reply
  14. Brinda Vijay says

    July 11, 2022 at 9:15 pm

    Your stories always capture my imagination. Love the nuances about after life. Gives us all hope. I look forward to seeing more. Keep at it!

    Reply
  15. Sandy N Vyjay says

    July 16, 2022 at 5:06 pm

    This is an interesting piece of fiction. The ending is really very nice and gripping. You should write more fiction. Sandy N Vyjay

    Reply
  16. Anjali Tripathi says

    July 17, 2022 at 9:49 am

    Wow!! Beautifully knitted. Loved reading it. Your stories never fail to captivate anyone. Keep going!

    Reply
  17. Docdivatraveller says

    July 18, 2022 at 11:33 pm

    Another incredible piece of writing Moni! Love the names of the protagonists, the plot of course and the ending is superb!

    Reply
  18. Ishieta says

    July 19, 2022 at 12:22 pm

    this was sucha sweet story – i liked the play of words and feelings – very relatable.

    Reply
  19. Noor Anand Chawla says

    August 12, 2022 at 12:40 pm

    Interesting story!

    Reply

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