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My Beautiful Wife

August 15, 2022 by Moni 32 Comments

I still remember the day I saw her. She had big dark eyes, natural red lips, and voluminous long hair that was flowing like a fountain. She was beautiful. Who could have guessed that she was 250 years old already? My brothers and cousins were gawking at her. I couldn’t help myself from falling for her, and I instantly said yes to the marriage.

I loved her dearly; her every wish was my command.

I would have been alive only if I had known on the 15th day of our wedding she would sacrifice me to the demons to retain her youth and immortal life.



This blog post is part of the blog challenge ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’ hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla.


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Filed Under: NanoTales Tagged With: Blogaberry Dazzle, haunted nanotale, nano tale, short story, witch

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  1. Cindy D'Silva says

    August 19, 2022 at 1:23 pm

    ooooh spooky and interesting!

    Reply
  2. Anjali Tripathi says

    August 20, 2022 at 1:04 am

    Oh, I was like, am I reading correctly when I read 250 years old? It was beautifully penned the short story.

    Reply
  3. Flavia Cutinho says

    August 20, 2022 at 8:57 am

    Hahaha
    When I read my beautiful wife I was life newly married, here it was a different scenario all together.

    Reply
  4. Samata says

    August 20, 2022 at 11:00 am

    The Nano Tale remind me of once very popular mega serial although I didnt watch it much … Nazar of Monalisa. It was Daiyans story where she trapped men with her immortal beauty

    Reply
  5. Smita Saksena says

    August 20, 2022 at 1:01 pm

    OMG tiny but scary tale….I must say you have a great quality to write these tiny tales that can give anyone goosebumps.

    Reply
  6. Vasumathi says

    August 20, 2022 at 1:39 pm

    Kahani mei twist!

    Reply
    • Aurora M says

      August 22, 2022 at 10:35 pm

      Oh ! Never thought the end would be like that

      Reply
  7. Kaveri Chhetri says

    August 20, 2022 at 4:12 pm

    Oh my my Moni… you continue to amaze me with your twists… who would have thought of something like this.

    Reply
  8. sandy n vyjay says

    August 20, 2022 at 4:51 pm

    This is a very brief and very interesting story. A tale very well told and also scary at times. Would love to read a longer story.

    Reply
  9. Madhu Bindra says

    August 20, 2022 at 6:20 pm

    Too good. Glad to be back reading your nano tales. I don’t enjoy horror stories but love the ones you write.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      August 20, 2022 at 6:29 pm

      And I love your comments

      Reply
  10. Ritu Bindra says

    August 20, 2022 at 11:05 pm

    That was quite a twist. And trust you to pull out that one. Looking forward to enjoying another season with your nano tales.

    Reply
  11. Seema Bardeskar says

    August 21, 2022 at 9:25 am

    Very interesting! Loved the way the wife has been expressed in the story. Would like to read a long version of this full of thrill.

    Reply
  12. Nikita Jhanglani says

    August 21, 2022 at 1:19 pm

    M.I.N.D B.L.O.W.I.N.G
    A thousand times over!

    Reply
  13. Jenifer says

    August 21, 2022 at 1:25 pm

    In short, u were able to portray the right feelings & scare. That’s impressive.

    I liked this short horror story. If I would have read at night, I might have terrified.

    Reply
  14. Varsh says

    August 21, 2022 at 5:30 pm

    Oh, I thought she might be an alien or something. That was a wonderful twist!

    Reply
  15. Swati Mathur says

    August 21, 2022 at 6:24 pm

    Your nano tales are very intriguing. What a twist, I read it twice to get it right.. Kudos to you.

    Reply
  16. Manisha Garg says

    August 21, 2022 at 7:17 pm

    The twist was totally unexpected.

    Reply
  17. Jeannine says

    August 21, 2022 at 7:35 pm

    Woah! Wasn’t expecting that ending and was totally caught of guard! haha…I’m hooked and would love to read more of this kind of writing/poem/short story/ or whatever you call this kind of article. Great one!

    Reply
  18. Shail Thosani says

    August 21, 2022 at 9:04 pm

    I love your short tales. This is as always is exceptional. I could picturise the story in my mind. You described the lady so well. Her hair, lips I could picturise it all.

    Reply
  19. Harjeet Kaur says

    August 21, 2022 at 9:40 pm

    You sure pack a punch in a tiny tale! I had to reread it to believe what it was. Spooky is not my cup of tea but this is like spooky laced with thrill.

    Reply
  20. Docdivatraveller says

    August 21, 2022 at 9:42 pm

    Now this was a really intriguing piece of writing! Loved the spooky part!

    Reply
  21. Pamela Mukherjee says

    August 21, 2022 at 11:31 pm

    Too tooo good Monideepa. In love with your writing style .

    Reply
  22. Jhilmil D Saha says

    August 22, 2022 at 12:57 am

    This is the shortest horror story I have ever read. At first I thought its going to be something romantic. But that ending, spooky

    Reply
  23. Sindhu Vinod Narayan says

    August 22, 2022 at 1:06 am

    I never expected that end to be honest. The title caught me and made me feel that this was going to be romantic so was the beginning

    Reply
  24. sonu chouhan says

    August 22, 2022 at 6:04 am

    When i read 250 years ..i thought it to be an error..but on continuing..i was like wowwww…men she have the power to keep her readers holded .

    Reply
  25. MeenalSonal says

    August 22, 2022 at 9:43 pm

    I guessed as witch the female character but you are awesome with giving twist. Loved the end.

    Reply
  26. Neelam says

    August 23, 2022 at 11:42 am

    OOOO what an end. Loved reading it

    Reply
  27. Gunjan says

    August 24, 2022 at 1:29 am

    Omg such spooky ending, I like how with few words you have captured an entire story so nicely

    Reply
  28. Raghav Dudeja says

    August 24, 2022 at 12:24 pm

    Maa! Please take me home. I’m uncomfortable and scared!

    Reply
  29. Pooja Jha says

    August 26, 2022 at 1:06 am

    This such an amazing and scary movie scene, It’s chilling to read……

    Reply
  30. Noor Anand Chawla says

    January 17, 2023 at 10:49 pm

    Ouch! That’s a painful love story!

    Reply

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