The Honest Confession

Previously on Chronicles of Maya: Was it just an illusion?

Z and Maya had grown closer over time. Z considered Maya as a dear friend whom he trusted, and Maya had developed feelings for him. However, sometimes Maya felt that Z still had feelings for his ex. When Z spoke about his past, Maya could see a certain emptiness in his eyes that made her wonder.

One night, while they were together, Z tenderly kissed Maya’s forehead. As she opened her eyes, Maya looked into his eyes and said, “You should call her, you know. Maybe she’s waiting for you to reach out.”

Z was confused and asked, “Who are you talking about?”

“Your ex,” Maya replied, her voice trembling a little. “You both loved each other, after all.”

Z gently lifted Maya’s chin and said firmly, “I don’t want her anymore.”

Maya laughed, feeling a little uneasy. “Then who do you want?” she asked.

Z hesitated for a moment before answering, “Not you.”

Maya laughed again, feeling a little hurt. “I see. Why buy a cow when you can get milk for free?”

Z grew exasperated, but before he could speak, Maya placed a finger on his lips and whispered, “Shh… Just sleep now.”

Z hugged her and fell into a deep slumber. Maya watched him sleep peacefully and thought to herself, “I am really in love with you.”

Maya knew that she was emotionally damaged and believed it was impossible for someone to love her the way she loved Z. She longed to be with him, but she wondered if Z could ever feel the same way about her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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This blog post is part of the blog challenge ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’ hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla and happily SPONSORED BY RRE Studios and SHOWCASE Events.

 

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Edited by Kuntala Bhattacharya from Travelogue of Kuntala

115 thoughts on “The Honest Confession”

  1. the turn in your story has reminded me the karan johar’s movie’s dialogue “Ek tarfa ishq ki takat hi kuch aur hoti hai”. looking forward for next part of story..hoping Z will also get fall in love with Maya. great write up indeed.

  2. Eternal love triangle. Most of the time we dont value what we have and hanker after what we dont or what we have left behind in the journey of life. We forget past can be relived only in our mind, in reality things have moved on. Difficult to create a moment gone by and best thing is to embrace what one has at this moment. Nice story of love and dilemma.

  3. If Maya could see the emptiness in Z’s eyes then she should know he is over his ex and could just be cautious about starting a new relationship because his ex hurt him badly. If he still had feelings for his ex, Maya would see a lot more than just emptiness in his eyes.

  4. The suspense! Thanks for making me want to read more LOL I’m a sucker for stories that seem to have an underdog. Good luck, Maya. Hoping for the happy ending to the story!

  5. Wanting someone to return the love you feel for them when you’re emotionally damaged is such a painful situation to be in. I hope Maya can heal and be whole so she can receive the love she desires to have. This is a great story!

  6. i have watched lots pf movie same story like this,,,,i hope this one could end up on the big screen too

  7. i am intrigued by this post, would be reading the previous links to understand more about Z, Maya and the incidents that happened before. Kudos to building up such an interesting plot

  8. If Maya thinks she can’t be loved because she is broken, then she doesn’t love herself. She can’t expect others to love her until she starts loving herself.

  9. Good going. Story seems to be added with more suspense. People take the things and people in their life for granted. They realize when it’s too late. Let’s wait, what’s next.

  10. This is so intriguing.. Can’t wait for the climax. Love your writing style… Story and sweet yet powerful .

  11. I would hope Z loves Maya. If not she should move on. Life is too short on wasting time with someone who doesn’t appreciate you.

  12. Maya’s story really breaks my heart. I have known so many women like her over the years. I’ve been her at one point. Loving someone who doesn’t love you.

  13. Poor Maya. She thinks she unlovable, but really, Z is just not the one for her. It’s so heartbreaking to even read a story like this that highlights how we as women can turn something in on ourselves like that.

  14. This story makes me value the simple boring love stories that are out there. Boring love stories can be great, truly. The situation Maya is in right now seems quite painful. I do want to know how it all ends though. Thanks for sharing!

  15. It’s so heartbreaking knowing that someone can’t fall in love with someone who’s emotionally damaged. I can’t wait for the next chapter of this.

  16. Oh love! Why are you so complicated? Well, Maya should also examine herself and make sure she is completely healed as well so she won’t think of herself not worthy of being loved.

  17. What an interesting twist, and to encourage someone to contact their ex! I am looking forward to reading the next installment of this story.

  18. Maya needs to learn to love herself before she can love someone else. I felt it in my heart when he said he didn’t want his ex and when she asked who do you want? Me? and he replied no, not you. Ugh, my heart broke.

  19. Ahh! I desperately want to read the next part. The character of Z is getting interesting now. You are a wonderful writer, see the comments everyone is waiting for next part.

  20. This story is definitely carrying on in an interesting way. Sounds to me like Maya needs to step away from Z for a moment and heal heal heal.

  21. Ah, this love story keeps getting interesting and interesting. The way how Maya seducing herself to make Z love her. She has a good personality and I think she will make him love her.

  22. I love love love love love the story, but my favorite part is the last two lines. “Maya knew it was impossible for someone to love her because she was emotionally damaged. She was completely in love with Z and wanted to be with him, but will Z ever love her the way she did?”. This is sooo true for me, and I know a lot of girls can relate to this. Thanks for sharing your gift with us!

  23. “No,not you” can someone punch Maya alread? How old is this girl? She needs to let go already. Z isn’t the only man in the world. Ugh!! I’m literally screaming.

  24. Z could still have love for his ex, but not be IN LOVE with his ex. There is a difference. You can look back fondly on your old days and show love, but not want those days back.

  25. What next? Will Z love Maya or is he still in love with his X..what will happen to Maya, will she be able to take it…waiting for these answers 🙂

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  27. Kuntala Bhattacharya

    The series is going on really well, keep it up. Suspense and suspense, that’s what is intriguing here. Excellent

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