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Care…..matters!

January 25, 2021 by Moni

Previously on Chronicles of Maya: The Honest Confession 

Maya had faced a lot of adversity in her life as she lost her parents when she was only 12 years old. However, her family had always been there to support and spoil her, yet Maya never became a brat. As she grew older, Maya became more independent and eventually landed a job in Vadodara, Gujarat. After suffering from a severe accident that partially paralyzed her, Maya desired a quiet, solitary life away from her family.

At a party celebrating Anil’s 34th birthday, Maya was lost in thought, reminiscing about her past. Anil’s girlfriend, Sana, approached Maya with a drink in her hand and teased her about her relationship with Zan. Despite denying that they were dating, Maya admitted that she was in love with him.

As they talked, Anil joined the conversation, asking if Maya had told Zan about her feelings. Maya explained that she had sent him a message, but deleted it before he could read it. Anil was frustrated and urged Maya to confess her love, but Maya believed that Zan already knew how she felt.

Maya stood up to leave, and Anil watched as Zan talked with another girl. Anil started planning something, knowing that Maya would not like it, but he believed it was for her benefit.

The story raises questions about Anil’s true intentions. It’s unclear whether he genuinely cares for Maya or if everything is just a facade. It remains to be seen whether his plan to help Maya win Zan’s heart will succeed or backfire.

                                                                                                                                            to be continued…

 

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  1. Alpana Deo says

    January 25, 2021 at 2:30 am

    I really wish Anil to do something. Maya cannot be like this. And Z should have some respect for Maya if he knows her feeling for him. Waiting for the next chapter.

  2. Cinny says

    January 25, 2021 at 5:14 am

    That sounds like an interesting read. I may have to get my hands on it.

  3. Bryan says

    January 25, 2021 at 8:07 am

    You’re keeping us in suspense! I can’t wait to see if Z and Maya confess their true feelings for each other.

  4. Abhijit Ray says

    January 25, 2021 at 10:37 am

    Story is continuing at a nice pace. Look forward to read the next post.

  5. ruchita mathur says

    January 25, 2021 at 5:50 pm

    Suspene is great. I liked your writing style. You keep the suspense but still tell the story so we like it

  6. Emman Damian says

    January 25, 2021 at 5:58 pm

    I wonder what will happen if Maya accepts it? If not, will she still have the same feelings? I will definitely read the previous chapters!

  7. Carrie Ann says

    January 25, 2021 at 8:26 pm

    I’m on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait to read the next installment!

  8. Ronnie says

    January 25, 2021 at 9:58 pm

    Ohh this one is a page turner. Looking forward to reading the continuation to this story and where her love for him leads!

  9. Kuntala Bhattacharya says

    January 26, 2021 at 12:04 am

    Intriguing story, keeping us all waiting for the next. Love or just fun, that’s what we need to wait and watch I feel.

  10. Emily Fata says

    January 26, 2021 at 12:33 am

    I always love reading about the next adventure in the Chronicles of Maya!

  11. Amber Myers says

    January 26, 2021 at 1:07 am

    You write so well. I look forward to seeing what happens next!

  12. Caroline says

    January 26, 2021 at 1:19 am

    I’m intrigued by this story. I should go read the previous chapters.

    • Moni says

      January 26, 2021 at 3:06 am

      Please go ahead, you may like them!

  13. Nyxie says

    January 26, 2021 at 1:20 am

    Ohh the suspense! Very interesting installment. And, can I just say, I love your writing.

  14. Luna S says

    January 26, 2021 at 1:59 am

    Another interesting addition to the story! I feel for her loving someone who doesn’t love her back the same.

  15. Tara Pittman says

    January 26, 2021 at 2:29 am

    Such a great love story. I enjoyed reading this chapter and hope that he reveals his love for her.

  16. Colleen says

    January 26, 2021 at 2:30 am

    Maya needs to stop it with this unrequited love stuff. It’s time to find someone who wants her the same way she wants them!

  17. Hang Around The World says

    January 26, 2021 at 2:34 am

    I’m looking for the next post now, I’m too curious now… You write so well that you are able to catch my attention and this so amazing. Thanks for sharing it. – Amalia

  18. Rok says

    January 26, 2021 at 2:45 am

    New here… Is that your own story, or?

    • Moni says

      January 26, 2021 at 3:05 am

      Stories are always fiction… arent they?
      Happy reading!

  19. Brianne says

    January 26, 2021 at 3:10 am

    I feel like if she has to wonder that much, he’s not for her. She needs to find someone new. Also, I’m loving these continued entries!

  20. Surbhi Prapanna says

    January 26, 2021 at 4:22 am

    Wow you are really good in fiction writing. i loved these posts from you. characterization of all characters is so perfect. now, I am waiting to know what happen next?

  21. Leah says

    January 26, 2021 at 4:33 am

    Can’t wait for the next chapter! Great blog.

  22. Lavanda Michelle says

    January 26, 2021 at 4:47 am

    This is a very interesting post, I will make sure I read the next part. Maya and Sana seem like characters I would like to get to know better. Thanks for sharing!

  23. Elle says

    January 26, 2021 at 5:27 am

    What a crazy story and plot twist.

  24. Elizabeth Ervin says

    January 26, 2021 at 8:10 am

    When are Z and Maya going to confess their feelings? Love a good story. Thanks for sharing.

  25. Marjie Mare says

    January 26, 2021 at 8:28 am

    What a beautiful read. Thanks for sharing another great post with us.

  26. Agnes says

    January 26, 2021 at 8:33 am

    I enjoyed the read very exciting how the short conversation of Maya and Anil. Thanks for sharing.

  27. Ashley t says

    January 26, 2021 at 9:51 am

    This is such a great story. I cant wait to read the next post on this.

  28. abzstylz says

    January 26, 2021 at 10:22 am

    I had to go back to catch up, and now I’m hooked! lol Can’t wait to see what happens next.

  29. Swati Mathur says

    January 26, 2021 at 12:38 pm

    I think Anil will me a mediator and surly help Maya ,as I don’t think he should have any hidden agenda,what say?

    • Moni says

      January 26, 2021 at 9:44 pm

      let’s see

  30. Amila says

    January 26, 2021 at 1:01 pm

    It is interesting to read Maya’s story each week.You write it nicely…

  31. sam says

    January 26, 2021 at 1:52 pm

    suspense turns in to curiosity to know further, very nice written

  32. Kenneth says

    January 26, 2021 at 3:48 pm

    this makes me feel like i wanna read the whole story…where can we find the book.or is it available online?

    • Moni says

      January 26, 2021 at 9:43 pm

      Read the previous posts…

  33. Rosey says

    January 26, 2021 at 4:00 pm

    People can tell if you like them. I bet he knows.

  34. Krysten Quiles says

    January 26, 2021 at 4:42 pm

    Eek, the suspense, I need to know what happens next!

  35. Ej Requina says

    January 26, 2021 at 5:22 pm

    Okay I’m back reading your other post as I need to understand the backstory of this. Glad i stumbled on your post.

  36. Elizabeth O says

    January 26, 2021 at 6:15 pm

    Maya deserves so much better than what she’s getting from Z! I hope she realized this soon and moves on. I love her character.

  37. Azubike Eze says

    January 26, 2021 at 6:21 pm

    Is Maya really content to care and to love, without wanting him to be his? She should be more optimistic.

  38. Denise says

    January 26, 2021 at 7:54 pm

    love the idea of a continuing story. Very interesting read – can’t wait to see what happens next.

  39. Lisa says

    January 26, 2021 at 9:05 pm

    Another lovely tale. Taking care of ourselves and of others is so important.

  40. Nisha says

    January 26, 2021 at 9:29 pm

    Nice pace and love your storytelling style, makes the reader curious and want to know more.We will have to wait to know if he cared or was just a facade

  41. Lyanna Soria says

    January 26, 2021 at 10:05 pm

    Another great story and I can’t wait to read more. It’s important to care for yourself first then others.

  42. Gervin Khan says

    January 26, 2021 at 10:38 pm

    It’s such a great and cute story, love the part that she got the message but erase it too. I’ll definitely be looking forward to what will be on the next issue.

  43. Sara says

    January 26, 2021 at 11:18 pm

    Loving the suspense! I hope everything works out for Maya. Rooting for her ♡

  44. Marysa says

    January 26, 2021 at 11:40 pm

    I am enjoying reading the twists and turns in this story. Can’t wait to hear about what happens in the next installment.

  45. Mandi says

    January 27, 2021 at 12:05 am

    I haven’t seen a fiction writing blog in a long time! An interesting spin on the blog

  46. Yudith Napitupulu says

    January 27, 2021 at 12:52 am

    Is Anil will help Maya to trough out her illusion loves? Waiting for next chapter.

  47. Alvern says

    January 27, 2021 at 1:37 am

    Oh dear, I really do feel so sorry for Maya. She deserves someone who truly loves and cares for her.

  48. Renata - bye:myself says

    January 27, 2021 at 2:29 am

    Oh, finally a new chapter! Your writing basically puts a spell on me.

  49. Marjie Mare says

    January 27, 2021 at 6:01 am

    You are really a great writer and I enjoyed this so much. Can’t wait for more.

  50. Marjie Mare says

    January 27, 2021 at 7:48 am

    I truly enjoy your style of writing. I am coming back for more for sure.

  51. Heidii says

    January 27, 2021 at 8:24 am

    What a great little excerpt! Thanks for sharing!

  52. Amber says

    January 27, 2021 at 9:34 am

    Omg leaving us in suspense! Lol I wanna hear more!

  53. Jhilmil D Saha says

    January 27, 2021 at 4:19 pm

    Cant wait to read the next part to see what’s next. Very nicely written.

  54. Sonia Madaan says

    January 27, 2021 at 5:15 pm

    Intriguing story. Hope Maya confesses soon….the suspense element is increasing now.

  55. Shail Thosani says

    January 27, 2021 at 6:02 pm

    Another part to go! I hope Maya finds her love soon.

  56. tweenselmom says

    January 27, 2021 at 6:36 pm

    this is interesting, I didn’t know that you can be hooked in reading short but continuous stories

  57. aisasami says

    January 27, 2021 at 6:55 pm

    It feels like Z doesn’t love Maya. The examples are in the previous chapters. I just don’t feel like he treats her well.

  58. Shar says

    January 27, 2021 at 8:05 pm

    Interesting… I wonder what happens next. I’ll wait for the next blog post to find out.

  59. littlemisadvencha says

    January 27, 2021 at 8:43 pm

    I haven’t started reading the first parts of this chronicle. but I always dream about writing the way you do. Keep it up! 🙂

  60. Fransic Verso says

    January 27, 2021 at 9:36 pm

    A lot happening on this episode. Z should at least give some respect that Maya has feeling for him.

  61. Joanna says

    January 27, 2021 at 11:04 pm

    I am looking forward to read the rest of the story, it looks like a twist is coming.

  62. Payal Shankar says

    January 27, 2021 at 11:09 pm

    Loved the read. Definitely suspense is your skill. Keep it coming! 🙂

  63. Lyosha says

    January 28, 2021 at 12:06 am

    I really wonder if Anil help Maya. She seams a good friend and may be talking to Z might do them both well. I really don’t fully understand why Maya thinks Z will never love her

  64. Melanie says

    January 28, 2021 at 12:37 am

    What a great story of love, I can’t wait to read the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing

  65. Di Hickman says

    January 28, 2021 at 3:21 am

    Really loving the installments of this story unfolding. I like Maya but still feel she needs some growth, some self love. She seems to base her worth on the love of another. Whereas Z is the opposite, seems to be very self involved and loves no-one.

  66. Mila R says

    January 28, 2021 at 4:18 am

    Now I am really wondering if Anil did truly care for Maya… hmmm?

  67. Gurjeet Chhabra says

    January 28, 2021 at 9:30 am

    I really want to know more ,what Anil does? What’s his plan? Maya got her love? She expressed her love? Interesting story.

  68. WanderlustBeautyDreams says

    January 28, 2021 at 9:49 am

    Loved this except! Cant wait to read more. Your writing is so good!

  69. Prerna Wahi says

    January 28, 2021 at 12:12 pm

    I was really hoping you would conclude the story in this post. the suspense is killing me now!

  70. Bhawna Shah says

    January 28, 2021 at 2:25 pm

    I loved all your previous post and fund that you always kept your audience in a suspense. And then everybody is in curious mode to know what next will happen. I wish Anil could do something for Maya.

  71. Denise says

    January 28, 2021 at 4:45 pm

    This is interesting! I wonder if Anil will fall in love with Maya. It looks to me that he isn’t aware of it yet but it looks like it’s developing into something more. Either way I’m okay with either Anil or Z whoever Maya ends up with so far in this story!

  72. Lori Bosworth says

    January 28, 2021 at 7:43 pm

    Maybe Anil can bring Maya and Z together? I understand Maya’s reluctance to confess her feelings because she doesn’t know how Z feels.

  73. Harjeet Kaur says

    January 28, 2021 at 8:58 pm

    I thought it is the end of the bloghop and your story ends too 🙂 Hope its not a sad ending. Waiting for the next post.

  74. Marjie Mare says

    January 28, 2021 at 9:09 pm

    The suspense is real, I love the story and can’t wait for more.

  75. Michele says

    January 28, 2021 at 10:07 pm

    Why is Maya so negative? She thinks so little of herself. Like how could someone love her, but Z won’t do anything about it because Maya is not making it seem like she wants things to go further. There are too many games being played here.

  76. Priyanka Nair says

    January 29, 2021 at 12:04 am

    I still see a ray of hope! May be Anil cares…waiting for next page

  77. sonam jain says

    January 29, 2021 at 12:09 am

    love your story and the suspense around it
    . I am sure I’ll be waiting for your next post now

  78. Vasumathi says

    January 29, 2021 at 4:23 am

    Though this is a love story, the ‘mystery’ deepens 🙂
    Awaiting the next chapter in the M-Z love story

  79. siennylovesdrawing says

    January 29, 2021 at 6:06 am

    ohh woow…impressive talent you have, always enjoy your stories here, looking forward for more. cheers, siennylovesdrawing

  80. Yashila Barnwal says

    January 29, 2021 at 2:44 pm

    Intriguing story, keeping us all waiting for the next. Love or just fun, that’s what we need to wait and watch I feel.

  81. Ritu Bindra says

    January 29, 2021 at 4:48 pm

    Expectations and expecting the other person to know it all. With Anil in the mix, looking to see how it turns out. Awaiting the next chapter.

  82. Clarice says

    January 29, 2021 at 10:33 pm

    I think this is the most intriguing part of the story. I wish Maya would have to courage to tell Z now. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

  83. Crystal Carder says

    January 30, 2021 at 1:57 am

    I am going to have to catch up on the previous chapters, this sounds so intriguing!

  84. renee says

    January 30, 2021 at 4:46 am

    I think Anil does truly care for Maya. Excited to find out!

  85. Alita Pacio says

    January 30, 2021 at 6:41 am

    This is fascinating. I look forward to the nest post

  86. Tingandthings says

    January 30, 2021 at 7:32 am

    Really suspenseful story. Can’t wait to read more!

  87. Sivaranjini. A says

    January 30, 2021 at 10:32 am

    You write so well and always ends with a question in mind. superb

  88. Natalia Voche says

    January 30, 2021 at 11:08 am

    Such a beautiful written! I can’t wait to read more

  89. Nkem says

    January 30, 2021 at 11:17 am

    Very interesting as usual. I like how we get to learn about Maya as the story is progressing.

  90. Oscar Oganiza says

    January 30, 2021 at 12:20 pm

    “I care.. that’s all that matters. He won’t be mine but I will be his forever”.

    This really hurts.

  91. Nikki Wayne says

    January 30, 2021 at 2:02 pm

    Such an interesting story. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

  92. Sundeep says

    January 30, 2021 at 2:42 pm

    Its really quite interesting and each and everyone of us wanted to know what happened next. Waiting to read the next part

  93. Minal Jain says

    January 30, 2021 at 3:05 pm

    I am coming back for sure for opening of suspense…. seems so interesting to read

  94. Abha Singh says

    January 30, 2021 at 5:13 pm

    Z’s feelings for Maya is still a mystery. Let’s see how this love story unfolds. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

  95. Sabina Green says

    January 30, 2021 at 5:51 pm

    Wow! You are such a great writer. I am looking forward to what happens next in the story.

  96. Raksha says

    January 30, 2021 at 5:56 pm

    Another beautifully written part of the story. I really wish Anil has a part and helps Maya. Really looking forward for the next part.

  97. Michele says

    January 30, 2021 at 7:21 pm

    Maya needs to find someone who will be straight with her and not do this friend with benefits. Someone who is going to give Maya the love and affection she deserves.

  98. Docdivatraveller says

    January 30, 2021 at 9:14 pm

    I really love the write up. Would really like to know what happened next!

  99. Akanksha Singh says

    January 30, 2021 at 10:49 pm

    Wow.. I guess read a piece of it a few days back in your blog… Really need to check out the back story.. it’s so beautiful

  100. Urvashi says

    January 31, 2021 at 8:47 am

    it is the most twisted thing – LOVE. I can never imagine a love story that doesn’t have drama in it. Now where is Anil taking this story to… my nails have given up on me. i need the next part of the story. what happens?

  101. Archana Srivastava says

    January 31, 2021 at 11:28 am

    Fingers crossed, may Anil succeeded to make reach Maya’s feelings to Zen. Just like the story my excitement level is continued. Well paced!

  102. Rahul Prabhakar says

    January 31, 2021 at 11:49 am

    Having read Maya’s story, I can truly relate to what she must be feeling. The path towards love in today’s time needs to be treaded cautiously.

  103. Hansa Kajaria says

    January 31, 2021 at 3:08 pm

    Now I am intrigued to knw what happens next. What did Anil do to help out Maya. Waiting to read the next post.

  104. Sweta Papaiyawala says

    January 31, 2021 at 3:33 pm

    Wonderful piece and yes Maya should find someone who falls for her. Waiting for next.

  105. Srishti Rajeev says

    January 31, 2021 at 4:03 pm

    First you say Anil is planning something, then you say was it a facade? This suspense is killing. And you are killing it at story telling. I am not participating in Feb but will surely check out the story

  106. Jyoti says

    January 31, 2021 at 6:50 pm

    Wow story is getting intersting .Suspene is great. You keep the suspense in every story so waiting for next part .

  107. Suhasini I.P. says

    January 31, 2021 at 8:44 pm

    Now I am getting hooked to your story, this is really interesting one

  108. Rochelle says

    January 31, 2021 at 8:48 pm

    Ohh I like the suspense keep the anticipation going !

  109. Nehal Roy says

    January 31, 2021 at 8:59 pm

    Suspense is killing, you wrote it so well.Amazing post.

  110. Bella says

    January 31, 2021 at 10:34 pm

    I love reading this!! i cant wait to see what happens next!! your such a great writer

  111. Amritha Srinath says

    January 31, 2021 at 11:05 pm

    Oh My God Moni, that line “I care.. that’s all that matters. He won’t be mine but I will be his forever”, just melted my heart. There was so much of heartache, pain and love conveyed in that line. Beautifully written.

    And that cliffhanger about Anil planning something, is too much to handle now. Please share the story ASAP. I am so, so glued to it.

    Hope you are continuing the participation for February too!

  112. Michele says

    February 1, 2021 at 12:24 am

    Although I have some issues with Maya. I am still very interested in how this story is going to play out. Can’t wait for the next installment.

  113. Sindhu Vinod Narayan says

    February 1, 2021 at 1:48 am

    Looking forward to know what anil planned and I’m sure he would help Maya here. Love the pace

  114. Su Chanprasong says

    February 1, 2021 at 5:37 am

    Ohh! This is rather juicy! I want to hear more! Who is Zan??? I can’t wait to the next one!

  115. Celebrate Woman Today says

    February 1, 2021 at 7:30 am

    Lot’s of little mysteries in just one scene. As I have not read it all, only this part, I have a ton of questions!
    But keeping that suspense is what makes us keep reading on.

  116. Sandy N Vyjay says

    February 1, 2021 at 5:50 pm

    This is such a fascinating story. Makes for interesting reading.

  117. Mosaic Designs says

    February 1, 2021 at 10:15 pm

    Your story omg!! I wanna know more now….This is too exciting for me, too exciting. Thank you so much.

  118. Yanitza says

    February 20, 2021 at 3:00 am

    Well, I’m having my doubts about Anil. I’m not sure if he honestly cared for Maya. Will have to keep reading…

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