My Beautiful Wife

I still remember the day I saw her. She had big dark eyes, natural red lips, and voluminous long hair that was flowing like a fountain. She was beautiful. Who could have guessed that she was 250 years old already? My brothers and cousins were gawking at her. I couldn’t help myself from falling for her, and I instantly said yes to the marriage.

I loved her dearly; her every wish was my command.

I would have been alive only if I had known on the 15th day of our wedding she would sacrifice me to the demons to retain her youth and immortal life.

This blog post is part of the blog challenge ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’ hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla.

32 thoughts on “My Beautiful Wife”

  1. The Nano Tale remind me of once very popular mega serial although I didnt watch it much … Nazar of Monalisa. It was Daiyans story where she trapped men with her immortal beauty

  2. Oh my my Moni… you continue to amaze me with your twists… who would have thought of something like this.

  3. In short, u were able to portray the right feelings & scare. That’s impressive.

    I liked this short horror story. If I would have read at night, I might have terrified.

  4. Woah! Wasn’t expecting that ending and was totally caught of guard! haha…I’m hooked and would love to read more of this kind of writing/poem/short story/ or whatever you call this kind of article. Great one!

  5. I love your short tales. This is as always is exceptional. I could picturise the story in my mind. You described the lady so well. Her hair, lips I could picturise it all.

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