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Traumatized

October 10, 2022 by Moni 22 Comments

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“Parents are an integral part of our lives, they love us, they protect us and they nurture us. A mother is considered to be a best friend of a girl. What will you do if she is the reason for your lifelong trauma?” Preeti looked at Ditvi and asked?

Ditvi has been counseling patients for more than 10 years now. When she heard the sentence, she was dumbfounded.

“You can share your trauma with me to release the burden from your heart.”

“What good will it do? Will it give me back my childhood? Will it make me stop hating my body? Will the feeling go away where I was taken advantage of? Tell me, doctor?”

This wasn’t what Ditvi was expecting to hear. She couldn’t digest the fact that how a mother could…

“If you share your pain, you will feel less burdened and…” Preeti interrupted Ditvi in the middle as she said “… and what doctor?… you can’t give me back what I lost…”

Ditvi took a long breath but before she could say something but Preeti continued, “Yes, I killed my mother and those people too and I am not sorry for that. Now at least I have my revenge. I won’t go back on my words. Don’t try to save me, doctor. With this death sentence, I will be in peace now.”

Ditvi didn’t know what to say, for the first time ever she was out of words. She stood up put and walked out of the cell. As she walked, she couldn’t help but think that will Dipti’s death honestly give her peace?

 

 



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This blog post is part of the blog challenge ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’ hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla in collaboration with Baked Happily Ever After.



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Filed Under: NanoTales Tagged With: Blogaberry Dazzle, child abuse, dark tales, nano tale, short story, trauma

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Comments

  1. Cindy D'Silva says

    October 13, 2022 at 7:12 pm

    Ooooh deep!!!

    Reply
  2. Samata says

    October 14, 2022 at 11:32 am

    Monideepa I will not comment much but just a line… If a power was given to me to pick a deserving nano story writer… the name will be you

    Reply
  3. Jeannine says

    October 15, 2022 at 7:27 am

    Oh this story is so mysterious and got so twisted. It’s engaging yet I don’t want to play much of those kind of stories in my thoughts throughout my day. ugh! Great story writing. Truly engaging.

    Reply
  4. Flavia Cutinho says

    October 15, 2022 at 7:32 am

    No one can estimate the intensity of pain she was going tru to do such a crime

    Reply
  5. Kaveri Chhetri says

    October 15, 2022 at 5:32 pm

    Wooooooah… so scary Moni… this is the kind of stuff my hubby loves to watch. I am a little confused tho’ with the names… in the ending who is Dipti?

    Reply
    • Moni says

      October 15, 2022 at 7:31 pm

      Dipti is a patient and murderer

      Reply
  6. Madhu Bindra says

    October 15, 2022 at 5:42 pm

    We always hear talking it out helps but does it work for everybody? I liked how you incorporated such a difficult topic with ease within the story.

    Reply
  7. Anuradha Sowmyanarayanan says

    October 15, 2022 at 9:22 pm

    The power of your diction has brought such a big incident in few lines.

    Reply
  8. Neeta Kadam says

    October 15, 2022 at 10:49 pm

    No one can feel what Dipti has been going through. You write it so well. How can one kill own mother?

    Reply
  9. Vasumathi says

    October 16, 2022 at 1:54 am

    Parents not always do the best for their kids. Sometimes they can be very demanding & controlling too. Dipti must have been really traumatized to not even want to talk about it. Is there a full story in the making?

    Reply
  10. Swati Mathur says

    October 16, 2022 at 9:52 am

    OMG.. Loved it. Scary but you can imagine amount of pain one goes through to do such a hurandeous crime.

    Reply
  11. Shail Thosani says

    October 16, 2022 at 3:00 pm

    A sad reality. Child abuse shakes the soul of the kid and most of the times the abused child becomes a offender or criminal because of the mental trauma. You have written on such a powerful topic in such simple words and a very strong depiction in just a small scene.

    Reply
  12. Varsh says

    October 16, 2022 at 3:46 pm

    I can’t imagine what the girl went through and I hope she does find peace in death. Living a scarred life might not give her that.

    Reply
  13. Anjali Tripathi says

    October 16, 2022 at 4:02 pm

    Loved how you handled such a complex subject in the story with ease. True. No one could feel the pain she was going through.

    Reply
  14. Sakshi says

    October 16, 2022 at 5:27 pm

    Interesting and thought provoking.
    Agree with Madhu – talking it out isn’t for everyone. Folks experience and process emotions differently.

    Reply
  15. Ritu Bindra says

    October 16, 2022 at 5:38 pm

    That raises quite a pertinent question, Monidipa. This is something different from you and I really liked how you kept it open-ended. Letting the reader decide.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      October 16, 2022 at 5:38 pm

      Thanks for understanding

      Reply
  16. Docdivatraveller says

    October 16, 2022 at 7:39 pm

    This was really unexpected. Although killing is a very enormous step, often we tend to find flaws in parents especially after we grow up. We vow not to repeat those with our own offspring.

    Reply
  17. Jhilmil D Saha says

    October 17, 2022 at 12:28 am

    That is a shocking tale indeed. If Dipti is the patient and murderer, who is Preeti then? I guess I got a bit confused here. Nonetheless, speaking to someone would never give her peace.

    Reply
  18. Nikita Jhanglani says

    October 17, 2022 at 12:42 am

    I wish I could think of and write as many nano tales as you! By the way, did you mean Preeti in the end (and not Dipti)?

    Reply
  19. Harjeet Kaur says

    October 17, 2022 at 5:13 pm

    Oh whoa! This is dark. I really am amazed how you can relate so much with just a few words. The punch is deadly and sets the reader thinking for a long time.

    Reply
  20. Noor Anand Chawla says

    January 21, 2023 at 2:33 pm

    I don’t think revenge is the answer. I too feel Preeti will not find peace.

    Reply

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