It’s been a year and a half since this girl moved into this apartment. Almost every second night her boyfriend comes in, they drink together and he hits her brutally then goes away. The girl always patches up with him, who knows why.
The girl knows I am here, she feels me. When her boyfriend is here I have tried to scare him but it doesn’t work. I hope all goes well and I get to feed on this guy’s blood.
After all, this is the same apartment where his brother killed and buried me.
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This blog post is part of the blog challenge ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’ hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla in collaboration with Baked Happily Ever After.
Scare ghost stories befitting Halloween. Yummy!
This was interesting. You know how to keep readers engaged
Cindy DSilva says
oh gosh! I wasn’t expecting that ending at all! I even read it twice to confirm, Such a creepy short story which I would probably ponder till the afternoon. ugh!!! Great writing though. It’s really engaging!
Shail Thosani says
Spookyyy! I love your short spooky stories. You have a way with words it transports the reader into your story as if actually happening.
Anuradha Sowmyanarayanan says
The way you pen the short story is engrossing.
Anjali Tripathi says
Oh!! Again you came up with a powerful short story. You have got great talent, dear. Always love the story twist.
What is the girl waiting for? Getting killed and joining in? Well-written and crisp.
Madhu Bindra says
This is a story perfect for Halloween. Your nano horror stories are scary but fun to read.
Flavia Cutinho says
Something spooky this Halloween, I love the the horror suspense that u keep for the last.
Neeta Kadam says
Again you stumbled me! Horrible and I again love it. This time I read it to my hubby and he love to. ❤❤
Kaveri Chhetri says
omg Moni… it gave me the chills. How do you come up with such amazing errie stufff???
First I thought that the cover picture was eerie. But then the plot turned out to be even more eerie!
Ritu Bindra says
You should consider compiling these nano tales into a book, Monidipa. These are so good. Another winner from you.
I hope all goes well too!
Harjeet Kaur says
Eeeks! Blood-drinking ghost! Your stories are so gory and the way you put it across in a few words is spine-chilling.. I really admire your style and way with words.
Nikita Jhanglani says
Perfect story for Halloween! Not exaggerating, I was reading it with bated breath.
Jhilmil D Saha says
Ok its 3:30 at night and Halloween, and I am reading this. That’s creepy enough for me.
Noor Anand Chawla says
Ouch! Very gruesome!