It was a chilly winter night when Sub Inspector Prathamesh and his group of officers were out for a round in the area in their police car. They all were posted in a town where the crime was comparatively lesser than other places and due to that they also had very little chance to earn extra cash.
However, tonight was different, it was almost the end of the month and they all wanted to drink up but everyone’s pocket was tight. As they were discussing their bad luck while they crossed a deserted road suddenly they saw a car which was shaking hysterically.
“Seems like God listened to us”, said Akhil the asst. Sub Inspector along with three other constables giggled. “First, let us check what are these people doing inside”, said Sub Insp Prathamesh.
As they all stepped down from the car and walked towards it tiptoed what they saw terrified them. No one was inside, neither in the front seat nor the back.
“Run-run it is a haunted car”, Akhil shouted as everyone ran back to their police car and drove away.
A while later a car mechanic came out with his girlfriend from below the car. “You were right, people won’t find us here”, the girlfriend said as they both started laughing hard.
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hmmm… interesting twist.. becuz I watch so many murder mysteries etc. I had started to visualize the cops getting down from.the car n was waiting for something really scary… thankgod! didn’t happen.
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Hahaha I really liked the twist in the end. I really didn’t expect this for sure. Well written
Didn’t see that coming. I thought this would be a scary horror story and I loved that twist in the end. I really enjoy reading your stories. You are very talented.
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I must admit i look forward to reading your posts
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I liked the twist ending, was expecting a horror but it turned out to be humorous! Well done!
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Logistics aside, that was quite a twist at the end. The poor cops got a scare of their lives. Another good one Monidipa.
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Lol! Quite a clever lot. You built it up well. I wasn’t expecting this.
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Your plot twists always leave me in splits, after they scare me. Look forward to your posts!
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Haha, seriously? Under the car? Mechanics are used to it but didn’t know that their gfs found it fun in emergencies too! Nice twist!
Hilarious. Loved the twist. I’m just squirming thinking how uncomfortable it might be under the car 😉
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OMG. I just loved the unexpected ending. You have built it up really well. Loved it.
Haha! This one had me laughing hard. Great twist. You write very well even though it is a short story you have made it so interesting with suspense, comedy et al.
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Haha such a hilarious twist to the really scary beginning. Loved reading it.
Haha… This was so much fun. You seem to be acing nano tales. This is one genre of writing I haven’t explored.
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I loved the ending. What a twist, I did not see that coming. Really like your writing.
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What a wonderful short story never expected this twist.
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Ha ha ha, how beautifully you created the thrill and gave the much needed twist to make it funny. Loved it
This was seriously hilarious ! I wish every corrupt policeman who dreams of looting a civilian goes through such haunted scare.
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This is amazing!!!!! loved it
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I liked the twist in the end. Loved your stories short and interesting.
LOL!! I am only imagining what the cops will be discussing and that they will never go towards a shaking car again 🙂
Yet another twisted tale – I admire the way you twist a horror story into a humorous one.
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I am not sure if I should be amused or angry. I was expecting solid fear but then the comedy made go now what!! Sinister!!
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Hahahaah! I have liked this story immensely.