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The Car is Haunted

March 16, 2022 by Moni 43 Comments

It was a chilly winter night when Sub Inspector Prathamesh and his group of officers were out for a round in the area in their police car. They all were posted in a town where the crime was comparatively lesser than other places and due to that they also had very little chance to earn extra cash.

 

However, tonight was different, it was almost the end of the month and they all wanted to drink up but everyone’s pocket was tight. As they were discussing their bad luck while they crossed a deserted road suddenly they saw a car which was shaking hysterically.

 

“Seems like God listened to us”, said Akhil the asst. Sub Inspector along with three other constables giggled. “First, let us check what are these people doing inside”, said Sub Insp Prathamesh.

 

As they all stepped down from the car and walked towards it tiptoed what they saw terrified them. No one was inside, neither in the front seat nor the back.

“Run-run it is a haunted car”, Akhil shouted as everyone ran back to their police car and drove away.

 

 

A while later a car mechanic came out with his girlfriend from below the car. “You were right, people won’t find us here”, the girlfriend said as they both started laughing hard.

 



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Filed Under: NanoTales Tagged With: Blogaberry Dazzle, haunted, haunted nanotale, microstory, nanotale, short story, spooky stories

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  1. Kaveri Chhetri says

    March 18, 2022 at 8:32 pm

    hmmm… interesting twist.. becuz I watch so many murder mysteries etc. I had started to visualize the cops getting down from.the car n was waiting for something really scary… thankgod! didn’t happen.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 18, 2022 at 8:36 pm

      Glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by.

      Reply
    • Hansa Kajaria says

      March 21, 2022 at 9:41 am

      Hahaha I really liked the twist in the end. I really didn’t expect this for sure. Well written

      Reply
  2. Madhu Bindra says

    March 19, 2022 at 12:50 pm

    Didn’t see that coming. I thought this would be a scary horror story and I loved that twist in the end. I really enjoy reading your stories. You are very talented.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 19, 2022 at 6:39 pm

      Thank you. Glad u liked it

      Reply
  3. Flavia Cutinho says

    March 19, 2022 at 2:10 pm

    I must admit i look forward to reading your posts

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    • Moni says

      March 19, 2022 at 6:38 pm

      Thanks. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  4. Meetali Kutty says

    March 19, 2022 at 3:54 pm

    I liked the twist ending, was expecting a horror but it turned out to be humorous! Well done!

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    • Moni says

      March 19, 2022 at 6:38 pm

      Haha. Thanks. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  5. Ritu Bindra says

    March 19, 2022 at 4:50 pm

    Logistics aside, that was quite a twist at the end. The poor cops got a scare of their lives. Another good one Monidipa.

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    • Moni says

      March 19, 2022 at 6:37 pm

      Thanks. Glad u liked it

      Reply
  6. Sonia dogra says

    March 19, 2022 at 5:15 pm

    Lol! Quite a clever lot. You built it up well. I wasn’t expecting this.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 19, 2022 at 6:37 pm

      Haha. Glad u liked it

      Reply
  7. Mayuri Nidigallu says

    March 19, 2022 at 9:20 pm

    Your plot twists always leave me in splits, after they scare me. Look forward to your posts!

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    • Moni says

      March 19, 2022 at 9:38 pm

      Thanks. Glad you liked it

      Reply
    • Moni says

      March 20, 2022 at 9:10 pm

      Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it

      Reply
  8. Varsh says

    March 20, 2022 at 11:16 am

    Haha, seriously? Under the car? Mechanics are used to it but didn’t know that their gfs found it fun in emergencies too! Nice twist!

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 20, 2022 at 9:10 pm

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  9. Zenobia Merchant says

    March 20, 2022 at 12:08 pm

    Hilarious. Loved the twist. I’m just squirming thinking how uncomfortable it might be under the car 😉

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 20, 2022 at 9:09 pm

      Haha. But thanks. Glad you liked it.

      Reply
  10. Swati Mathur says

    March 20, 2022 at 12:19 pm

    OMG. I just loved the unexpected ending. You have built it up really well. Loved it.

    Reply
  11. Shail Thosani says

    March 20, 2022 at 1:29 pm

    Haha! This one had me laughing hard. Great twist. You write very well even though it is a short story you have made it so interesting with suspense, comedy et al.

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    • Moni says

      March 20, 2022 at 9:09 pm

      Thanks. Glad you liked it.

      Reply
  12. Jhilmil D Saha says

    March 20, 2022 at 7:39 pm

    Haha such a hilarious twist to the really scary beginning. Loved reading it.

    Reply
  13. Rahul Prabhakar says

    March 20, 2022 at 7:49 pm

    Haha… This was so much fun. You seem to be acing nano tales. This is one genre of writing I haven’t explored.

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    • Moni says

      March 20, 2022 at 9:08 pm

      Thanks Rahul. Glad u liked it.

      Reply
  14. Raksha says

    March 20, 2022 at 9:06 pm

    I loved the ending. What a twist, I did not see that coming. Really like your writing.

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    • Moni says

      March 20, 2022 at 9:08 pm

      Thanks. Glad u like it.

      Reply
  15. Sindhu Vinod Narayan says

    March 21, 2022 at 1:44 am

    What a wonderful short story never expected this twist.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 21, 2022 at 3:25 pm

      Haha. Thanks.

      Reply
  16. Pooja Jha says

    March 21, 2022 at 5:24 am

    Ha ha ha, how beautifully you created the thrill and gave the much needed twist to make it funny. Loved it

    Reply
  17. Docdivatraveller says

    March 21, 2022 at 9:07 am

    This was seriously hilarious ! I wish every corrupt policeman who dreams of looting a civilian goes through such haunted scare.

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 21, 2022 at 3:25 pm

      Yes. Thanks for stopping by.

      Reply
  18. Vidhya Thakkar says

    March 21, 2022 at 1:56 pm

    This is amazing!!!!! loved it

    Reply
    • Moni says

      March 21, 2022 at 3:24 pm

      Thank you.

      Reply
  19. Abha Mondal says

    March 21, 2022 at 10:36 pm

    I liked the twist in the end. Loved your stories short and interesting.

    Reply
  20. Vasumathi says

    March 22, 2022 at 12:30 am

    LOL!! I am only imagining what the cops will be discussing and that they will never go towards a shaking car again 🙂

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    • Moni says

      March 22, 2022 at 10:32 am

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  21. Kashish Mahtani says

    March 22, 2022 at 12:41 pm

    Yet another twisted tale – I admire the way you twist a horror story into a humorous one.

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    • Moni says

      March 22, 2022 at 12:47 pm

      Glad u liked it

      Reply
  22. Bedabrata Chakraborty says

    March 22, 2022 at 10:13 pm

    I am not sure if I should be amused or angry. I was expecting solid fear but then the comedy made go now what!! Sinister!!

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    • Moni says

      March 23, 2022 at 8:01 pm

      haha.. glad you liked it.

      Reply
  23. Noor Anand Chawla says

    May 2, 2022 at 11:03 pm

    Hahahaah! I have liked this story immensely.

    Reply

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