It was a cold winter night when Sub Inspector Prathamesh and his team of officers were patrolling the town in their police car. Despite the relatively low crime rate in the area, the officers were feeling the financial strain of the end of the month and were hoping for an opportunity to make some extra cash.
As they drove along a deserted road, they suddenly noticed a car shaking violently. “Looks like our luck has finally turned,” joked Akhil, the assistant sub-inspector, prompting laughter from the three constables in the car.
“Let’s go check it out and see what’s going on,” suggested Sub Insp Prathamesh.
The officers cautiously approached the car, expecting to find some sort of criminal activity taking place. But to their surprise, there was no one inside, neither in the front nor the back seat.
“Quick, it’s a haunted car! Let’s get out of here!” yelled Akhil, as they all ran back to their police car and sped away.
A short while later, a car mechanic emerged from beneath the car, accompanied by his girlfriend. “You were right, no one would think to look for us here,” his girlfriend said, as they both burst out laughing at the sight of the terrified police officers running away.
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hmmm… interesting twist.. becuz I watch so many murder mysteries etc. I had started to visualize the cops getting down from.the car n was waiting for something really scary… thankgod! didn’t happen.
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Hahaha I really liked the twist in the end. I really didn’t expect this for sure. Well written
Didn’t see that coming. I thought this would be a scary horror story and I loved that twist in the end. I really enjoy reading your stories. You are very talented.
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I must admit i look forward to reading your posts
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I liked the twist ending, was expecting a horror but it turned out to be humorous! Well done!
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Logistics aside, that was quite a twist at the end. The poor cops got a scare of their lives. Another good one Monidipa.
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Lol! Quite a clever lot. You built it up well. I wasn’t expecting this.
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Your plot twists always leave me in splits, after they scare me. Look forward to your posts!
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Haha, seriously? Under the car? Mechanics are used to it but didn’t know that their gfs found it fun in emergencies too! Nice twist!
Hilarious. Loved the twist. I’m just squirming thinking how uncomfortable it might be under the car 😉
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OMG. I just loved the unexpected ending. You have built it up really well. Loved it.
Haha! This one had me laughing hard. Great twist. You write very well even though it is a short story you have made it so interesting with suspense, comedy et al.
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Haha such a hilarious twist to the really scary beginning. Loved reading it.
Haha… This was so much fun. You seem to be acing nano tales. This is one genre of writing I haven’t explored.
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I loved the ending. What a twist, I did not see that coming. Really like your writing.
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What a wonderful short story never expected this twist.
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Ha ha ha, how beautifully you created the thrill and gave the much needed twist to make it funny. Loved it
This was seriously hilarious ! I wish every corrupt policeman who dreams of looting a civilian goes through such haunted scare.
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This is amazing!!!!! loved it
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I liked the twist in the end. Loved your stories short and interesting.
LOL!! I am only imagining what the cops will be discussing and that they will never go towards a shaking car again 🙂
Yet another twisted tale – I admire the way you twist a horror story into a humorous one.
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I am not sure if I should be amused or angry. I was expecting solid fear but then the comedy made go now what!! Sinister!!
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Hahahaah! I have liked this story immensely.